Fanfiction || London Bridge Is Falling Down || Parker/Sophie || Part Three

[cuzimastripper]

Title: London Bridge Is Falling Down
Author: Sapphire Smoke cuzimastripper
Fandom: Leverage
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Parker/Sophie (some Nate/Sophie too, and Parker/OC)
Prompt: Sophie/Parker - burning bridges
Length Thus Far: 30,473 words
AU: Set two years into the future (from the end of season one). Nate and Sophie have been dating for awhile, and now live

Comments

[misantrop_whore]

*rubs eyes*
This is kind of dejavuish right now. And it's good, so far.
Keep keep keep going =)

[cuzimastripper]

Haha, I'm glad someone caught on to that. I'm playing with symmetry alot in this story lol.

"All Tangled Up"

[misantrop_whore]

Yeah... And Sophie kind of shoving Parker up against a wall it's getting a classic of yours

Very good rhythm. But here comes the after sex regrets...
*claps*

Re: "All Tangled Up"

[cuzimastripper]

I like walls... they're hot. Well, not the walls in particular, but you know what I mean lol

[serenelystrange]

Yay, finally! Sophie getting on with it I mean. Even though I'm sure you'll drag them all through hell and back before its said and done, with a hopefully happy ending, lol. But thats why you're awesome.

Also, "“Bed good, floor bad.”" That cracked me up. And only partly because it reminded me of "fire bad, tree pretty." I can just so picture her actually saying that lol.

Apparently I missed whatever was dejavuish about this.. but thats ok. I can be fairly oblivious, lol.

[cuzimastripper]

Haha, you know me far too well... damnit. lol.

LOL me too!

Mostly the nipple thing, since that is what happened the first time they kissed, which is relevant for the first time they're going to have sex, which I know everyone knows is coming because its ME so not much of a spoiler there lol. And the "Breakfast." "Right." was like the first time they realized something was going on between the two of them, but neither of them knew what then. Only that was "Food." "Right." lol. All the awkward moments involving meals... lol

[cuzimastripper]

I totally forgot the bed thing too - Parker saying she falls out of bed every morning and first morning Sophie sleeps with her she stops her from doing it.

Though then again Parker still falls off the bed of her own accord LOL

[serenelystrange]

In response to both your responses...

Ohhh, yeah, now I understand the dejavuiness. Once you said it I was like, "Duh!". I knew that!

*shakes head at self* I gotta think before I comment sometimes. :D

14-15

[serenelystrange]

So.. this continues to be awesome. And Parker is still made of win.

That being said, I beg in a tiny voice.. dont kill Nate. *ducks* Even if he is an abusive ass. Hurt him, sure. But please to no be killing our characters.

But.. it's your story, lol, so I'll know I dont actually have any say in this..

Anyway, hope you're feeling better! (twitter, but my phone doesnt let me respond.. stupid verizon)

Re: 14-15

[cuzimastripper]

I can't kill anyone - I already ranted all over Twitter about how I'd do it... and then you all would know and the shock value wouldn't be as epic lol.

One day I'll do a Leverage death!fic... just cause I apparently feel the need to do everything with Leverage. I read a death!fic that got Parker killed once... I cried lol. Parker should never ever die. Ever.

And thanks :) I need to find something to eat that my stomach can handle. Its difficult.

[blackgrl71]

i have to say that i've been in a TOTAL funk over the death of MJ and your fic is the only thing that has lifted my spirits... well that and a couple of shots last nite. so thank you - you are such a kick-ass writer!

[cuzimastripper]

Your welcome, and thank you :) lol

Yeah, Michael Jackson was supposed to live forever.

[blackgrl71]

I seem to remember that your occupation is a dancer? If so, than you GOTTA do a lil' somethin' to the King of Pop; say: Billie Jean or Dangerous... I'm just sayin'...lol. & Who'da thunk Liz Taylor would've outlived MJ?! Thanks for hollerin' back.

16

[serenelystrange]

Well, fuck. That does not bode well. God, I hate your Nate! Which is a complment, because you're writing his despicibleness(dont care if its not a word) so well! He needs so much help... and also a good ass kicking. Maybe Parker & Eliot can team up on him? Eliot mostly to make sure Parker doesnt actually kill him. Ok, shutting up now, your story, lol, not mine. I'm just so damn invested!

Also... Sophie high makes me giggle... that should be an episode. I'm just sayin.

Re: 16

[cuzimastripper]

I just love making Nate a huge jackass... it's fun for me LOL

Haha, it so should. I totally stole "I can hear my hair growing" line from Grandma's Boy. I fucking love that movie xD

Re: 16

[serenelystrange]

That's why it sounded familiar! I could hear it in my head but couldnt place it, lol.

Re: 16

[cuzimastripper]

-snickers- Best stoner/gamer movie EVER.