[Fic] Stay With Me

Apr 10, 2012 20:20

Title: Stay With Me
Author: cutthroatpixie
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Spain/Romano
Rating: PG
Warnings: Zike's attempt at angst. Humanafterunification!Romano
Summary: It's 1861. Spain knows he might not see Romano for awhile, due to all the work surrounding reunification, but Spain is prepared for this. He may not like it, but he is prepared.
Note: counterheist asked for ( Read more... )

hetalia, spain, fic, romano, writing

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counterheist April 11 2012, 03:27:37 UTC
thank you for catering to my whims

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cutthroatpixie April 11 2012, 03:28:02 UTC
np girl np

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counterheist April 11 2012, 03:45:22 UTC
counterheist April 11 2012, 03:39:32 UTC
also looks like you didn't close one of the italics tags right, in the middle there

also "He's wondered how it would to watch the person you love" is there a 'be' missing in there?

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counterheist April 11 2012, 03:38:25 UTC
He just never thought, in all his years of innocent, curious wondering, what it would be like to have that somebody being the only one growing old.

FUCKING HELL THIS FIC THIS LINE FUCK FUCK FUCK

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cutthroatpixie April 11 2012, 03:42:21 UTC
I'm still sad about writing that but I have no sad icons.

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counterheist April 11 2012, 03:44:09 UTC
THAT LINE

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cutthroatpixie April 11 2012, 03:47:20 UTC
I KNOW

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shibbyone April 11 2012, 04:23:24 UTC
This was brilliant

Really brilliant

And what's odd is I haven't actually heard of this trope before... and although I'm also not fond of those "unification and there's only one" stories this one was just so heartbreaking gah

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cutthroatpixie April 11 2012, 04:26:15 UTC
I'm glad you like it, thanks for reading! I was a little ehhh about writing it, but gotta go out on a limb sometimes I suppose.

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secretsunflower April 11 2012, 04:59:13 UTC
oh my gosh... this... it's so... heartbreaking!! :O And beautiful! You write wonderfully, and I really enjoyed the fic! Great work on this!!
*cries a little over the last line*
:'O

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cutthroatpixie April 11 2012, 05:03:38 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for commenting :) It made me sad writing it, man.

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youremarvelous April 11 2012, 06:00:20 UTC
Uuugh I love this soooo much even if it gave me way too many feels. I love the idea of a nation becoming human instead of just disappearing and honestly, I find it way way sadder that way, because now instead of this quick departure that allows one to move into mourning pretty quickly, you have this weird situation where both Romano and Spain know that Romano's dying and they're both mourning that and feeling that loss while he's still alive, and it's just so freaking depressing. The little scenes that you chose to highlight, like seeing the first wrinkle, were so perfect and punctuated that sadness. Angst attempt is successful!!! AH LOVE YOU BB.

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cutthroatpixie April 11 2012, 06:06:14 UTC
I LOVE YOOOOOU BB. I made myself sad lol I keep saying that but it is true. I'm glad you like it <3

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