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Delicacy Part Seventeen

Jan 01, 2008 18:21

Title: Delicacy Part Seventeen
Author: celticbard76
Word Count: 2,248
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Lord Beckett, James Norrington and Mrs. Prior (OC)
Pairings: mild Beckabeth, Beckett/Mrs. Prior and Norrington/Mrs. Prior.
Chapter Summary: Beckett grows increasingly paranoid while Mrs. Prior tries her hand at manipulation.
Disclaimer: I claim no ownership of ( Read more... )

elizabeth swann, james norrington, lord cutler beckett, author: celticbard76, original character

Comments 8

ophelivia January 3 2008, 01:32:50 UTC

Aaah as usual you brighten my day with her darkness my dear! So many good lines here. "Their wicked dance" "Prisoner and mistress" You are a brilliant writer.
And that new avatar is a joy! (I'm on the prowl for a bootleg. When I saw the movie last week I was brainstorming the whole time)

celticbard76 January 4 2008, 00:06:02 UTC

Hello again ophelivia, dear. It's always wonderful to hear from you, how are you? I hope you had a very happy holiday. Thanks so much for commenting. I'm glad you liked this chapter. I actually didn't like it myself. *shrugs* Also, thanks for noticing my new avatar. I think it's quite horrid, but I was never an adept icon maker really ^_^

Ah, you saw Sweeney Todd? What did you think? I loved it. Mrs. Lovett *is* Mrs. Prior I think, or the other way around, lol. Anyway, thanks again for reading and I do hope you enjoy your winter break.

ophelivia January 4 2008, 00:20:55 UTC

She was so devious! Completely mad, at times I thought she was crazier than Sweeney. But she was so very quiet about it, like at any moment she might just snap on someone unsuspecting. And yet at the same time she was very affectionate in her own way, kind of lost. I thought that was very true to Camilla

celticbard76 January 4 2008, 20:21:02 UTC

Yes, I definitely think she was crazier than Sweeney. He at least had a reason-however twisted-to justify his revenge. I have no idea though what was wrong with Mrs. Lovett. Too many bad pies, perhaps, but I thought her character was great anyway.

ariei_delmonte January 3 2008, 08:51:28 UTC

I love this story! I love the way you write and how you put your characters. I could wait months for this story. It's awesome!

celticbard76 January 4 2008, 00:08:05 UTC

Thank you so much! Your continued support of this story has been so encouraging. And you certainly won't have to wait months until the next chapter, I've already started working on it so it should be posted soon. Have a great weekend!

pink_bagels January 9 2008, 18:19:01 UTC

This story is fascinatingly dark and twisted--Just the way I like 'em! :D

Love it!

celticbard76 January 10 2008, 22:28:40 UTC

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment! I am so glad you are enjoying this story so far. The next chapter should be posted soon. Have a wonderful weekend!