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fourteen, 2/2 (glee - rachel/jesse)

Jul 16, 2010 00:06

Title: Fourteen (part 2)
Fandom: Glee
Characters/Pairings: Rachel/Jesse, with appearances by New Directions.
Rating: PG-13.
Summary: Fourteen years spanning Rachel and Jesse. Future!fic.
Notes: ~3800 words total. Spoilers for all of season 1. OMGroff, I feel so accomplished.

PART ONE.

( He feels eighteen again, young and naive and a bit clueless about love, and her voice is perfect; they’re singing together and it feels right. )

fic: glee, !fic, fic - fourteen, ship: st. berry, fandom: glee

Comments 32

laura_sommeils July 15 2010, 15:16:55 UTC

JKSADASDUOIASUSAIDIUASD Y LOVE YOU WITH ALL MY SHOLE SOUL BECAUSE THIS THIS THIS THIS THIS THIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIS IS AMAZING AND I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY AND IT'S GETTING DIFFICULT TO ME THINK THE WORDS IN SPANISH AND TRANSLATED IN MY MIND WHEN MY MIND IS LIKE PAODSPOAIDUSAPOIDSASADOIASO EPIC EPIC EPIC EPIC EPIC.
SO, yes, that's pretty much everything.
EPÌIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIC

cut_thestring July 16 2010, 06:29:54 UTC

LOL! THANK YOU + ILY. ♥♥

laura_sommeils July 17 2010, 00:25:18 UTC

Just telling the truth Sweetheart <3 Your fic is EPIC AND MAGNIFIC AND WHOA AND THIS MUST HAPPEN LIKE TOTALLY <3

*hugs*

cut_thestring July 17 2010, 08:41:31 UTC

Sighh I wish us fic writers could dictate what happens on the show....
And maybe have the team come up with some Sue one-liners every now and then.

LOL but then it'd be basically Lea & Jon as the cast. Occasional cameos by others. :P

*hugs back* ♥

saya_asakura July 15 2010, 15:20:45 UTC

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cut_thestring July 16 2010, 06:31:42 UTC

Move over Murphy/Falchuk/Brennan, it's Jen's turn now! There would be an uproar, lol.

THANKS. :D I'm glad you liked it <33

bambistarlight July 15 2010, 16:43:09 UTC

Awww! This was pretty!!! I like how there were inside references within the storyline! ;) You did a really good job!!! And I also love how everything comes back to the way they first met cause those kind of ironies are always the best!!!<3 <3 <3

cut_thestring July 16 2010, 06:38:25 UTC

I'm so glad you caught that! I was worried that people were just going to be like, 'Uhm. You wrote that phrase before...', instead of thinking they were inside references. (: I love stories that come in a full circle, I realise. :P Thank you! You were amazing to talk to as well, over at rachelandjesse! I hope you don't mind if I friend you?

(is that your blog, as well? firah.blogspot.com? I shall add to Google Reader list. :D

bambistarlight July 16 2010, 10:49:06 UTC

Awww....nah....I think you did a good job in separating it! And it's nice to be able to fit them into those slots cause really, it's not that difficult to interchange Lea with Rachel and Jonathan with Jesse... we just need to know what their separate characters to make the story work!;)

Full circle stories are always always fun!! Cause you don't expect them to happen and when they slowly unfold, especially if the author only gives small references at a time, it makes the ending all the happier! :D

Aww! You're amazing too actually! LOL!! I totally don't mind at all!! I'll add you back! Hahaha..yeah..that's my blog but that's been abandoned for a while..I've actually just started getting active on Tumblr...are you on it too? If you are, I'll follow you!!

cut_thestring July 16 2010, 22:36:54 UTC

Mm agree, in some fics they're harder to separate. I read one where Jesse ended up being Rachel's gay best friend, so that kind of fed that (but perhaps that's what the author was going for).

I like the ones where you go "Ohh, I see what you've done there!" :D Though my fic here wasn't entirely that, :P

I don't have a tumblr, unfortunately! So many people on my flist use it - maybe I should start, again, lol.

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katherine_lupin July 15 2010, 18:02:24 UTC

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cut_thestring July 16 2010, 06:40:19 UTC

Aww *blush* Thank you <33

fc2001 July 15 2010, 21:53:03 UTC

Yes. This. Absolutely this. I have decided that I resolutely refuse to believe in a future where there is no St Berry, a future which you paint beautifully here.

Do you mind if I make this whole story my head-canon for now? I mean, until we see what screwed up version of whatever the show has in store. In fact, if it's that bad, this story may well be my head canon for these two forever.

I'm going now, because I'm being weird and flaily and I think it's lack of sleep. I promise I'm not normally like this (and I'm only half-lying).

cut_thestring July 16 2010, 07:13:03 UTC

I think, in every good St. Berry shipper, we all know that they'll be together in the future. :D And/or storm Broadway like no other.

And that's so humbling to hear! *sniffs in emotion* I do not mind at all.

I mean, until we see what screwed up version of whatever the show has in store.
Oh, I know. I mean, we know what the future holds, but it'd be great if the writers acknowledged it, too. :P

THANK YOU FOR YOUR AMAZING COMMENT. ♥