Heroes - "Death Will Come With Your Eyes" - Sylar/Maya (ENGLISH)

Jun 05, 2008 22:27

Title: Death Will Come With Your Eyes
Fandom: Heroes
Author: herm_weasley
Beat-Reader: albion1919
Characters: Sylar/Gabriel Grey, Maya Herrera
Pairing: Gabriel/Maya (implicit)
Rating: PG-13 (for certain expressions)
Word Count: 1353 (W)
Warnings: One-Shot, Spoilers for S2
Summary: He was staring at the darkness of the night from the open window. The sky was black and ( Read more... )

fanfics, heroes: sylar/maya, ~ english translation, fandom: heroes

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dream_infinity0 June 6 2008, 00:01:20 UTC
loved the whole story....it fits perfectly with his character especially of the gabriel and sylar conflicts

great work

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herm_weasley June 6 2008, 17:13:55 UTC
Thank you so much :D

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razycrandomgirl June 6 2008, 02:25:01 UTC
*Shudders*

this was lovely and soft.

He had been told, once, that hate is nothing but frozen love.

I've never heard that before, but I'm adopting it!

But in that moment, there was Maya's breath melting his thoughts.

And he felt like he was sinning.

Gosh. That was nice!

this was like poetry.

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herm_weasley June 6 2008, 17:14:57 UTC
I've never heard that before, but I'm adopting it!

My Philosophy teacher said it during a lesson xD And I liked it!

Thank you so much, hon! <33

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albion1919 June 6 2008, 12:33:02 UTC
You know I love it, you really do have a poetic way with words <33

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herm_weasley June 6 2008, 17:15:32 UTC
Thanks so much! <333

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force_oblique June 7 2008, 06:23:59 UTC
Wow, your description is breathtaking!!!
I love the words you us and how you put it all together!!
What an exciting story!!
There are so many parts in this that I love...

And I adored that line..it left me speechless...

He had been told, once, that hate is nothing but frozen love.
But he had never - never - dreaded of something that could arrive to melt that ice, to help break him free, like he had never been before.
Awesomeness...

He was perfectly conscious about the fact that, in the long run, that flame that melts the ice would have probably swallowed him and burnt him alive.
Wheee, I have a story entitled : The fire That Melts The Ice" but it was Sylar/Eden! :D

Well done hun, this was amazing!

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herm_weasley June 7 2008, 10:40:25 UTC
Awwwwwwwwwww thanks so much! So glad you liked it :DDD

Wheee, I have a story entitled : The fire That Melts The Ice" but it was Sylar/Eden! :D
Oh God, when exams are over I'll try and catch up with all your Heroes fanfics involving Sylar, promised! :)

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force_oblique June 8 2008, 09:08:21 UTC
Erm I just remembered it is called :The fire That Melts the glass! lol
Sorry, but hey go ahead and read it whenever you have time!
It would make me giddy! ^^

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herm_weasley June 8 2008, 15:06:20 UTC
ahahah that's almost the same xDD
I promise I promise :D

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dana_serenity June 8 2008, 06:45:32 UTC
Gabriel scared him.
OMG, that is such a powerful image, and so so believable.

Like other have said, this reads like a dark poem my dear.
I loved every single word of it!
I'm so glad you decided to translate something again *bounces*
Great work ;)

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herm_weasley June 8 2008, 15:05:45 UTC
Thanks so much <3333
I'm so glad you liked it, yay! :D

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