Comments | cursednotes: "Taste" - Sylar/Maya - NC17

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"Taste" - Sylar/Maya - NC17 - English

Mar 02, 2008 22:05

My first ficlet in English! I'm excited xD

Title: Taste
Fandom: Heroes
Characters: Sylar (Gabriel Gray), Maya
Pairing: Sylar/Maya
Rating: NC17
Prompt: Shower
Words Count: 1417
Summary: He sank his fingers in her arms, tightening his grip on her. He heard her sighing and protesting weakly, but he didn't care. Why should have he?
Notes: This is my ( Read more... )

[italian p0rn fest], fanfics, heroes: sylar/maya, ~ english translation, fandom: heroes

Comments 15

dream_infinity0 March 2 2008, 21:25:00 UTC

wow, this was great....i'm really glad you put it in english.

loved it, loved it.

herm_weasley March 2 2008, 21:27:38 UTC

Thanks so much :DDD

I really appreciate it. Thanks ♥♥♥

albion1919 March 2 2008, 21:40:42 UTC

That was fantastic! So very hot and beautifully descriptive. Really nice flow to it.

(Do you think you could put spaces between the paragraphs? It's hard to read if the text is in one block :) )

Again, brilliant!

herm_weasley March 2 2008, 21:45:09 UTC

Wow thank you so much! (Sure! Hope it's easier to read now!)

♥♥♥

albion1919 March 2 2008, 21:47:20 UTC

You're welcome! (yep, much easier! ^_^)

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herm_weasley March 2 2008, 21:45:25 UTC

ahah, OMG, I hope it's in a good way xD

razycrandomgirl March 2 2008, 22:28:33 UTC

taking everything from that shiny toy that had unexpectedly fallen in his hands, pleading to be used and maybe... maybe broken.

Gabriel Gray loved precious things, unique and rare pieces, and Maya, in that very moment, was the most precious thing he had ever had.

oh yeah that's my favorite line! this pieces was filled with lots of tiny little jewels. I love seeing the amber liquid of Maya's skin. I love Gabriel's possession. MINE

He suddenly flushed, hot, as his movements became even more frantic

I love how you/he describes her as soft. You've done and excellent job and I hope this isn't the last we'll see of your work.

Also that's for translating it!

herm_weasley March 2 2008, 22:32:46 UTC

Thank youuu. You can't imagine how happy I am! So glad you like this!
Thanks ♥♥♥

Hope I'll be able to translate/write something else :))

razycrandomgirl March 2 2008, 22:34:04 UTC

I look forward to it! :D *happy dance*

dana_serenity March 3 2008, 14:52:34 UTC

EEEEEEEE!!! Everytime you posted a story I had to go 'damn, why didn't I study Italian?' but EEEEEE!! This is so hot, and good, and Guh!

You know you'll have to start translating more of your stuff now right? XD

herm_weasley March 3 2008, 18:15:05 UTC

awww thank you, hon!

I'll definitely try to translate something else!

Thanksss <3333

dana_serenity March 3 2008, 18:40:56 UTC

You're welcome hon!

Oh, I finished your story too!! *dances*

herm_weasley March 3 2008, 20:30:42 UTC

I've just read it ;_________________; OMG! I loved it <3 (and commented at your writing journal :D)