Really nice, gentle ending to the chapter -- a case where less drama really is more -- especially because I was feeling that Haldir was being left out...
I liked the idea that the Valar might have made a pass through the mountains especially for Legolas and his people, too.
Thank you - I wanted it to almost look as if it was building to a more dramatic point - perhaps a sex scene - and then change the whole mood, so I'm really pleased it works.
And a new pass through seemed well within their capabilities, I thought, and right for something that will be a whole new beginning for the whole continent, really. Almost a New Age!
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Great chapter !
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Huggs,
Lynda
From gloomy So.Cal.
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I guess, after your too hot weather, a bit of gloom might not be bad... for a day or two.
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Lynda
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I liked the idea that the Valar might have made a pass through the mountains especially for Legolas and his people, too.
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Thank you - I wanted it to almost look as if it was building to a more dramatic point - perhaps a sex scene - and then change the whole mood, so I'm really pleased it works.
And a new pass through seemed well within their capabilities, I thought, and right for something that will be a whole new beginning for the whole continent, really. Almost a New Age!
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