The Valinor Trail, Chapter Twenty Seven; Reunion.

May 24, 2014 20:10

Almost at the end of both the tale and the trail now...

Chapter Twenty Seven; Reunion
Word count; 2,735
Chapter Rated; Teen
Disclaimer as chapter one.
Beta as always, Speaker-to-Customers.

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returnverse, the valinor trail

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ffutures May 24 2014, 19:16:43 UTC
Cute!

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curiouswombat May 24 2014, 21:20:03 UTC
Thank you!

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syderia May 24 2014, 19:24:37 UTC
They meet at last.

Great chapter !

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curiouswombat May 24 2014, 21:20:45 UTC
They do indeed - thank you!

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anonymous May 24 2014, 20:27:34 UTC
Ah, happy sigh, together at last!

Huggs,
Lynda
From gloomy So.Cal.

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curiouswombat May 24 2014, 21:22:13 UTC
Thank you - I'm so glad that you liked it the reunion.

I guess, after your too hot weather, a bit of gloom might not be bad... for a day or two.

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anonymous May 25 2014, 03:42:27 UTC
Well, maybe just a day or two!

Lynda

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mrowe May 25 2014, 15:59:17 UTC
Ah, at last:-)

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curiouswombat May 25 2014, 19:01:44 UTC
Thank you - they did have a lot of continent to cross to get together... :)

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ningloreth June 8 2014, 11:07:16 UTC
Really nice, gentle ending to the chapter -- a case where less drama really is more -- especially because I was feeling that Haldir was being left out...

I liked the idea that the Valar might have made a pass through the mountains especially for Legolas and his people, too.

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curiouswombat June 8 2014, 13:55:48 UTC
a case where less drama really is more

Thank you - I wanted it to almost look as if it was building to a more dramatic point - perhaps a sex scene - and then change the whole mood, so I'm really pleased it works.

And a new pass through seemed well within their capabilities, I thought, and right for something that will be a whole new beginning for the whole continent, really. Almost a New Age!

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