Moving right along -- as I hope everyone else will. *ducks head*
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Sleeping with my Apprentice" by
anisapologist - Not the strongest Obi-Wan/Anakin I've ever read -- there are flaws of characterisation, incongruities of expression, dialogue that made me wince, structured shifts of mood instead of narrative flow -- but it's really pretty good for a first fic,
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