Slash fic: Captain Obvious and the Art of Intimidation (1/?)

[cupidsbow]

Title: Captain Obvious and the Art of Intimidation (1/?)
Author: cupidsbow
Pairing: EW/OB, LotR RPS AU
Rating: M
Warning: This is a work in progress! Also, crack!fic.
Length: 600 words
For: special_trille... <3
Disclaimer: I don’t know any of these people-it’s just a lucid fever-dream.
Summary: In which we see a super-hero from across a mostly-empty alleyway.

Comments

[algernon_mouse]

More! MORE!! You don't really need a PhD, do you??

Such a little teaser you are...but I loved it. This line I could clearly hear in my head: Never mind, yeah? He’s good now. Sorry about that.

So far, it has a bit of a Princess Bride feel to it, which is a huge compliment, because I loved that book/film.

Thanks, lovie.
That was a beautiful start to my day.

[arwench812]

Hehe, I'd totally agree with that Princess Bride comment, and the opening scene sounded a bit like The Glass Menagerie. Really cool, keep writing!

[aleathiel]

BWAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH! That is great. I love Elijah's little comments.

[soul_cake_duck]

Hahaha, crack!fic.
Love it, love it.
The Bad Guy glares at Elijah.

BAD GUY
What the fuck I ever do to you?

ELIJAH
I’ll give you a hint. In future, always leave a tip, man!

That was just too perfect.

[brightest_blue]

Ahahaha! Nothing like a little crack!fic to start the day off right. More please!

[karadin]

AHAHAHAHAHAH!

Made my freaking day! Thanks!