Sinner or Saint?: a Bones fanfic

[cupcakebean]

Woo hoo! I finally finished my fic for the comment meme! If you haven't been there yet, check it out. There's a lot of fantastic stuff to help us get through this hiatus.

Comments

[sexxymanggo]

Very very well written! One of those few smut scenes I can read without feeling like a complete perv :))

[cupcakebean]

Lol, thanks! I definitely feel kinda pervy when I'm writing them! ;)

[sb158]

Very nice. Well done; hot, but not trashy...

[cupcakebean]

Thanks! I try not to go over the top with the smut.

[bantam_shine]

*fans self* I'm going to need a cold shower. Lol. Great Booth point-of-view. The whole scenario was very realistic and not over the top, but still sweet and tender and sexy, all at once. Fantastic job! :)

[cupcakebean]

Lol, thanks! I'm not sure why I wrote it from Booth's POV... It just came out that way. I'm so glad you felt it was realistic. I can't stand when M fics are wildly OOC.

[lizook12]

Ahh! I'm so glad your Muse let you finish this! It was fantastic!

I adored the comfort and trust you infused in this piece. Instead of being concerned that they were still drunk, ruining what they had, they trust each other enough to know this is where they're supposed to be. The naturalness of it is just fantastic.

You are the only person I know that uses a word like ineb-inerb-in-whatever you said-when they’re drunk.” Okay, so maybe that last shot of Jack wasn’t the best idea either… My head was starting to swim.
LMAO! So true, that is definitely Bren and I love his struggle to try and say it, but failing!

The whole second part was sizzling, but this:
As my pants pooled around my ankles, her hot little hand cupped me through my boxers, eliciting an involuntary groan from the deepest part of my chest
Gaaahhhh *fans* that involuntary groan just intensifies the heat soooo much.

And I loved the humor and contented happiness of the ending. Very nice!

Great work, hun! :)

[cupcakebean]

Yay! I wanted to contribute to the comment meme, but stupid RL kept getting in the way of me finishing this. I'm so glad you liked it!

Instead of being concerned that they were still drunk, ruining what they had, they trust each other enough to know this is where they're supposed to be.

When I first started writing this, I had planned on just a short "B&B are drunk and going at it" fic. But I can't seem to take their feelings for each other out of the equation. As much as I believe they're hot for each other, I don't think love could ever not be a factor in them sleeping together, drunk or not. Hence the unintentional fluff-factor here. I'm happy that you felt it worked.

Thanks as always for the thoughtful comments. You know I appreciate it!

[sarah_fbi]

loved loved loved it! ♥♥♥ *swoons*

[cupcakebean]

Thanks hun! I'm glad you liked this. Love your icon, btw. =)

[sarah_fbi]

No thank you! lol *kisses*