Life After Love ~ Chapter 24

[cunningdeb]

Title: Life After Love Chapter 24
Sequel to: Lost in Life

Comments

[nolechica]

Damn, I really don't think Margaret deserves to be punished. However, hopefully her paper trail includes Jerry.

[cunningdeb]

Her actions weren't excusable but I think she was just a slut and taking advantage of a situation. In my heart, I don't think she knew of the fake contract. Jerry is afraid she would lead the authorities to him since she never tried to covered her tracks

Have a great weekend, next chapter up Monday

Huggles
Deb <333

[puska_baby]

grrr, Jerry makes me grit my teeth every time he's mentioned. I loved all the wedding talk though. :)

[cunningdeb]

It occured to me just as I was about to write this chapter that oh shit! the wedding! Time to plan

Have a great weekend, next chapter up Monday

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Deb <333

[fictionfreak15]

Whoa! Jerry's squirming now, the jerk.
I giggled when you introduced Grover, it fit so well :P Hopefully the boys will be able to concentrate on their wedding plans without too many distractions, but it looks like they've got a lot covered already. I'v been waiting so long for them to get married!!! And I'm glad Kris doesn't want all that's happening to affect their lives and make them cancel shit left and right. I think despite the tention, their friends made it through the get together really well.

I hope Margeret is so stupid that they catch her skinny ass before she even makes it out of town. Malcolm may not have turned Jerry in, but I bet that pathetic bitch would.

Love you Deb!!!! This was the best part of the day! Muah!!!! <3333333333333

[cunningdeb]

I figured calling the security Grover, Bert and Ernie would add a bit of levity to the growing tension. Will be checking out wedding venues in the next few chapters

Margaret just went on and lived her life after she left Malcolm, not trying to hide her whereabouts. That's why Jerry wants her to leave town, not to protect her but to protect himself the ass *grrr*

Have a great weekend, next chapter up Monday

Huggles
Deb <333

[robin1961]

YAY adam needs to make them pay !! I remember that chapter when margaret was on adam and he was tied up ... made me so pist ... hope she gets hers along with Jerry !! Great chapter and love that the music is the thing that still brings them together !!

Have I told you lately that I love your writing !!!

[cunningdeb]

Thanks robin, I really appreciate the love :)

I'm really trying to express how there is tension between Adam and Ken after the revelation but their relationship isn't a lost cause.

A littel foreshadowing: something will happen that will throw all the tension out the window and bring them together when they all need it most.

Have a great weekend and next chapter up Monday

Huggles
Deb <333

[crybaby4u]

Adam does need to make them pay but Margaret not nearly as much as Jerry. Throw the book at them!

[cunningdeb]

I'm with you. Margaret isn't completely innocent but Jerry is more guilty.

Have a great weedend, next chapter up Monday

Huggles
Deb <333