Comments | cuethe_pulse: Flash Forward, Pt. 2 [One Piece, Ensemble]

cuethe_pulse

Flash Forward, Pt. 2 [One Piece, Ensemble]

Jun 28, 2010 23:57

Title: Flash Forward
Fandom: One Piece (with a bit of a FlashForward crossover, in terms of plot)
Pairings/Characters: Sanji/Zoro mainly, all Straw Hats (but not as much Franky and Brooke ‘cuz I still have doubts about my ability to write them properly), various other pairings (past, present, and future), bunch of other characters and a handful of OC ( Read more... )

zoro x sanji, flash forward, zosan, buggy, nasopp, straw hats, one piece

Comments 12

mishagirl June 29 2010, 05:18:59 UTC

OOoooO!!! OH SNAP!! Nami/Usopp! And His dad heard from his girlfriend...no name attached.

Why am I thinking this "Smooth kidnapper" is going to be Sanji in disguise for an excuse to connect with Zoro?

I love Sanji getting up the nerve to address his feeling and go for it. YAY!

This was great and so fantastic to get another chp so soon!

ryu19 June 29 2010, 05:59:43 UTC

I'm really loving this story cue! The image of Nami walking alone reminded me of the ending theme of Black Lagoon and I can't wait to see all the new flashforwards you come up with.

poutergeist June 29 2010, 06:06:29 UTC

ooh nami!! you have to go with him *crocodile tears*
this was wonderful~will be waiting for the next! I hope it has more SanZo stuff :P

popkin16 June 29 2010, 06:09:06 UTC

I think what I love most about this -- ZoSan shipper that I am -- is that even if Zoro is interested, so far Sanji's been pining (or the manly equivalent). It just seems to me that it's always Zoro that looks at Sanji's long legs and flirting ways and gets jealous; I'm ridiculously pleased to be reading about Sanji wanting Zoro ♥

And oh! Poor Nami ;_; She was never one of my top favs, but to know that she never went with Usopp, and then to have Usopp's vision of his father saying his girlfriend is pretty...ouch. That has to hurt.

Reading this makes me want to re-read the manga and get back into the fandom.

cuethe_pulse June 30 2010, 02:32:56 UTC

Yess, I love fics that have Sanji chasing after Zoro instead of the other way around.

I torture Usopp and Nami a lot in my fics, don't I? >.>

popkin16 June 30 2010, 03:15:54 UTC

YES! Exactly so~

LOL You do, but we torture those we love >_>

theotherdenise June 29 2010, 09:31:37 UTC

Hmm, the plot thickens! It'll be interesting to see what changes Nami's mind, even as it is potentially heartbreaking. And Sanji chasing after Zoro is good to see!

I also really like Buggy's part in this |D

cuethe_pulse June 30 2010, 02:16:28 UTC

Haha, I have way too much fun writing Buggy. XD