Christmas ain't the time for breaking each other's hearts Pt 4[One Piece, ZoSan/Nasopp & ensemble]

[cuethe_pulse]

Title: Christmas ain’t the time for breaking each other’s hearts
Fandom: One Piece
Pairing/Characters: Zoro/Sanji, Usopp/Nami, Franky/Robin, Chopper, Luffy & Brooke
Rating: R
Disclaimer: One Piece and its characters do not belong to me.
Summary: Future fic; proposals and pregnancies are supposed to bring people together, not break them apart, but the

Comments

[ryu19]

Does Yasopp need to show up and slap some sense into Usopp or what?! Hopefully things will work out but I'm doubting a happy ending. Maybe an orphan will show up for them to adopt. Whatever way the dice falls, they're the ones who have to throw it.

Fantastic work cue. Thanks for continuing this incredibly moving story!

[cuethe_pulse]

Thank you! Thanks for continuing to read it!

[theotherdenise]

This story keeps on tugging my heartstrings. And it's perfectly encapsulated in this line: He wished things could go back to the way they were, back when they were silly kids connected by big dreams, who spent most of their time worrying about the marines and a bad storm, and walked away from with every battle with dumb grins on their faces because this is one battle which they can't win, but only delay the inevitable ;A;

On the other hand, Usopp and Chopper's conversation is adorable and light enough to balance out the angst.

Also, Man-Hugs is a brilliant chapter title.

[cuethe_pulse]

♥

Oh, good. I worried that moment wasn't light enough.

Haha, thank you. <3

[pillowmagic]

:_: I lack words. Dammit Usopp!

[cuethe_pulse]

Aw, I feel bad for Usopp.

ONE MORE CHAPTER AND THEN I CAN WRITE TENTACLE PORN.

[pillowmagic]

XDDD. Nice.

[twilight_imp_16]

Tentacle porn?! 0_0 I'm scared AND intrigued at the same time! XD

[amy_dino]

Heh, my brain's like Luffy's : I thought Zoro was trying to kill himself too. (I do realize that having Luffy's brain is not the best thing in the world ... ah, I'll live with it)

Only one chapter after that ?
Don't make me cry too much, okay ?

[I personnaly feel bad for Chopper. I can't explain why (I started to type the explanation, but my lack of knowledge in the English language avoided me from writing something coherent) but I do.]

[twilight_imp_16]

Sanji needs to kick some sense into Usopp's head. This was really angsty, but absolutely beautifully written. Can't wait for the next installment!