Comments | cuddyclothes: Risky Business

cuddyclothes

Risky Business - The Next Morning

Nov 05, 2011 10:31

Genre: angst
Word count: 611
Rating: PG for language
A/N Processing the last episode

( Wilson stared at the ceiling, House lying next to him. )

season 8, hilson, post-ep fic, genre: angst, house/wilson, fanfic

Comments 26

chocolate_frapp November 5 2011, 15:37:06 UTC

this needed to be said.

cuddyclothes November 5 2011, 17:16:07 UTC

Thanks. It wasn't written as an opinion piece, but rather how I thought the characters would react after such a cataclysm.

damigella_314 November 5 2011, 17:49:57 UTC

Thanks for the explanation. You definitely achieved your goal, and it was so painful to read, as it should be. (sorry for multiple edits, this fic has upset me a bit).

damigella_314 November 5 2011, 16:30:58 UTC

I have mixed feelings about this. This needed to be said, of course. But saying this while withdrawing, leaving House to cry alone, facing the wall... call me what you want, but I think it's too much. House can't be naked: he always has the anklet on. House is very fragile right now, and fragile people need help, not bashing ( ... )

cuddyclothes November 5 2011, 17:20:39 UTC

You're welcome. Fics are like Rorschak tests--everybody sees them differently.

lorib12 November 5 2011, 16:39:23 UTC

If Wilson truly does feel this way then he probably should leave; House would be better off. Can't say I agree with this but it was well written.

cuddyclothes November 5 2011, 17:17:28 UTC

I don't know if Wilson should leave or not. You can be deeply hurt, even betrayed, and still stay with someone you love. It's tougher.

lorib12 November 5 2011, 18:16:45 UTC

I didn't mean I didn't agree that Wilson shouldn't leave. I personaly think If he does feel like he does in your fic then House is better off w/out him. I really don't see Wilson having these feelings but House paid for his crime and I really didn't have a problem with him in the last ep, or think anymore of it needs to be discussed in canon. But I do think this piece is written well just don't agree with the content. Beauty of FF though is that there is the freedom to write what one feels.

cuddyclothes November 6 2011, 13:03:57 UTC

Yes, that's true. I'm not offended by your comments at all, in fact, it's nice to hear a different POV.

vicpei November 5 2011, 16:45:47 UTC

I love this, Elisa. You said everything that had to be said, and you even give Wilson's always awful sense of timing. Of course, he shouldn't say it now, and of course he would, if he was still in character. There needs to be an outburst of this sort, but there won't be. I read very few actual-House fics now, especially post eps, but I'm glad I read this one.

cuddyclothes November 5 2011, 17:18:47 UTC

Thank you! I wanted it to be quiet, the sort of conversation you have in bed (but shouldn't) rather than a big shouting fest. I'm so glad you read it.

menolly_au November 5 2011, 18:30:09 UTC

I think *somebody* needs to say this to House, because I've seen no indication that he understands what he did wrong, and given that Wilson in this fic is his next domestic partner (potential victim) than I think Wilson is quite right to be concerned.

I saw someone say again the other day 'no-one was hurt' (in reference to Moving On) and it just makes me want to scream.

cuddyclothes November 6 2011, 01:12:09 UTC

Yes, I know. People who say idiotic things like that have never had anything catastrophic happen in their own lives. That's the only reason I can come up.