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Desire’s Catalyst (for prompt 50)

Oct 08, 2015 12:18

Prompt: #50
Author: ANONYMOUS until reveals

Title: Desire’s Catalyst
Rating: NC-17
Length: 17,723 words
Summary: “Even if we really shouldn’t be doing this...” Joonmyeon whispered against the boy’s mouth, he could feel Jongin stilling in his hold as the boy anticipates his next words. “...let’s do this right.”

Notes: I think I overdid this. ( Read more... )

2015: submissions, rating: nc-17

Comments 6

jongjongmyeon October 8 2015, 05:34:13 UTC

This mah place right here. Rawr!

jongjongmyeon October 8 2015, 07:15:13 UTC

It's so hot I got burns all over me. Jongin is so horny I can feel it through my screen. So that's what sexual frustration is. But i honestly think that prior to that night, Jongin's already attracted to Junmyeon because I don't think he'd have that kind of reaction towards Junmyeon if he doesn't already feel anything. Makes me think if that's not the case that it could have been someone else who roomed with Jongin that night he could have done it with. I don't think so.

I love Kyungsoo's part in this story and how he silently helped and teased sukai. I love the part with the other members it's so nice. I like that despite the length of the story, it wasn't 'that' fast. I just think this deserves a part two.

I know who wrote this. I could tell. Though i haven't read this 'til now. But it
's so hot!

kaisbuttchin October 8 2015, 09:51:47 UTC

This is my prompt and I haven't read everything yet but SPOTTTTT
I might only get to comment properly after reveals idk if I'll be without internet the next days, I'll be on the road. But before I leave I just wanted to let you know that I could have never dreamed someone would write me almost 18k of beautiful, delicious SuKai. Honestly thank you so so so so much!

gellis813 October 15 2015, 01:06:02 UTC

This was awesome!!! OMG the scenes with sukai were so hot T_T and I really loved Soo's and Taemin in this story. Great job! Thank you for writing.

lotusk October 16 2015, 07:24:58 UTC

I really enjoyed this! The chemistry between sukai and well...the desperation to be together even though they couldn't admit to themselves that they wanted each other in a way that was anything but platonic and anything but straight!. There's something about secret lovers that's just an extra level of hot and desperate for each other orz. Kyungsoo's perceptiveness added an extra layer of drama to the whole thing. Thanks for sharing this!

The chemistry between sukai unmei100 February 25 2016, 04:40:40 UTC

I really enjoyed this! beautiful, delicious SuKai.