Won't Stop (for prompt 136)

[cuddlybros]

Prompt: #136
Author: ANONYMOUS until reveals

Title: Won’t Stop
Rating: PG-13
Other pairings involved: Baekhyun/Chen
Length: 5,140 words
Summary: “Still haven’t grown any balls to even say hi?”

Notes: To my recipient, I hope you like this! I don’t think I did your prompt as much justice as I wish I had, but I honestly enjoyed my attempt at this.

Comments

[eoryndal]

OMG SHY JONGIN WEARING GLASSES QUIETLY STUDYING IN THE BACK OF THE LIBRARY

SECRET ADMIRER JOONMYUN PINING AFTER HIM

THIS IS EVERYTHING <3

I wrapped my left hand around my right, fingers caressing the red string there, always a light tugging to be felt. Resting my lips on my knuckles, I whispered a soft sorry. Sorry I wished that. Sorry.
That was so sweet ;___;

The scene in which they found out that their red strings are connected made my heart flutter /pirouettes through the room

It's Jongin at the end, right right right??? Baekhyun being Baekhyun just dragged him there so he and Joonmyun can talk on the way home, right?
Will you maybe write a sequel one day? *________*

[alexa31]

OHMYGOOOOOOOOD I AM KINDA FREAKING RIGHT NOW?????? I have been reading your sukai time and time again, and you're commenting on my fic????? How???? What is articulacy

[misszhangyixing]

"I had hoped I never met my soul mate, if it would mean I’d stop feeling the way I do about him." Oh my goodness, this line just wow, so powerful in a way? It just shows how much Joonmyun likes Jongin, summed up in that one line.

"He looked at me, pleading me with his eyes (can you meet me halfway?), and leaned down a bit further. His nose brushed against mine, and I found myself holding my breath.

And then he said, “You’re beautiful to me, too. You’ve been for a while.” And-

Oh.

And I met him halfway."

(adbasdhsjdhkjsahdkjasdkjash that scene is my fave because oh my gosh all the feelings!)

I am so in love. This is gorgeous! I love how it's in first person POV because I get to be in Joonmyun's shoes and all the feelings man, I could feel it and I was all blushy all throughout the fic! Shy and hesitant Jongin is just the cutest and they're so cute and adorable together! All shy touches and so innocent I'm so hdsidgubdjhsu /criES/

I absolutely love your writing style, this fic is beautiful /kisses your nose/

[alexa31]

When I first read your comment, I had to stop myself because: ohmygod

[misszhangyixing]

After reading the 2 stories you posted (w/c i am so in love with if you hadn't noticed yet heh) of course i'll look forward reading more from you! Sukai needs all the love they can get after all ❤️

[lotusk]

This is such a sweet story ♡. I love library aus and the whole thing with the red string was just lovely. Also, these are my favorite lines:

And somehow, he was mine.

And I was his.

Thanks for sharing this!

[alexa31]

Library aus will forever be perfect. I love them so much!

Thank you so much for your comment! It means so much!!!!! And thanks for having and sharing your favourite lines in the story!! That makes it so much better!! Too many exclamations!!!!!

Thank you so so much. This is my first ever posted fic, so these comments mean a whole lot to me. Honestly. Thank you so much.

[lotusk]

Haha there is no such thing as too many exclamations! This is a story that gives so many warm feelings and you have much to be proud of!

[alexa31]

<3 Thank you!