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ES21 Fic: Five Things that Never Happened to Hiruma

Apr 22, 2006 20:55

Title: Five Things that Never Happened to Hiruma
Author: Reston
Summary: The title really is self-explanatory. Five could-have-beens.
Disclaimer: Oh, I wish.
Warnings: PG-13. Some violence, some suggestiveness. If you haven’t read every manga chapter, then some of these might not make as much sense as they otherwise would, plus you run the risk of ( Read more... )

es21, gen

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cubicle_days April 23 2006, 18:24:58 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad that you liked this so much. Yeah, Agon's an ass, and I've always adored Rui and Hiruma interaction because you just know who's the alpha male there, and I love how I agonized over each ficlet for hours except for number 3, which took me, like, half a minute to write (because it's true *cough cough*).

This was actually an insanely fun fic to write (except for the parts where I was agonizing), and it's great to hear that you enjoyed.

anonspore April 23 2006, 04:30:40 UTC

Forgive me, I just couldn't keep from laughing aloud at the image of Mamori blowing a wet kiss at anybody, much less Sena.

Liked #4 best. Agon is such a refreshingly evil villain.

cubicle_days April 23 2006, 18:30:12 UTC

Yeah, it's kind of a unbelievable image, isn't it? Seductive!Mamori on the loose! Run away!

Agon is indeed refreshingly evil, and you would not believe how much fun I had writing him that way. (Number 4 holds something of a special place in my heart, too.)

artemis_eld April 23 2006, 07:10:43 UTC

Holy shit, that is so something Agon would do...I feel sick. >_< Poor Hiruma.

cubicle_days April 23 2006, 18:33:47 UTC

Agon is violent and immature and arrogant and a predictable, predictable boy, and I can totally see him thrashing Hiruma in some dark alleyway (or classroom, in this case) the day after Shinryuuji loses to Deimon. (Because dammit, they're going to! It's a shonen manga! The main characters have to win!)

But man, yeah. Poor Hiruma indeed.

artemis_eld April 24 2006, 02:36:18 UTC

I can totally see that too, and I've told my ES21-loving friend this too. I'm a bit scared for Deimon to lose to Shinryuuji because I know Hiruma will taunt Agon and then I'm a little scared for him when that time comes. ._. Still, Hiruma would probably just be ambidexterous or something...^^;; Anyway, it was a good blurb.

oops artemis_eld April 24 2006, 02:38:58 UTC

^^;; that was me, I wasn't logged in I guess

kasugai_gummie April 23 2006, 08:04:18 UTC

I'm about to keel over with a sickening thud, but before I do so, just going to reiterate all the shnazz I've been spouting at you in the last five hours:

Number 4 rocks my non-existent shoelaces with the violence and absolute rational would-have-been-logistics of its situation, while number 3 is preciously in-character beyond belief. Actually, all are so deliciously in-character. (Good writing, mrrr.....) Number 1 is fine, so you can stop agonizing over it, and number 2 could've been better in that casino setting of yours, but is as good as it's going to get (as it is). And number 5.... yeah, physical description was done terrifically. The hotness. Yeah.

Now stop coming back to this post and editting, goddamit! D8

cubicle_days April 23 2006, 18:40:23 UTC

I love how you knew I would be editing so obsessively that I'd notice your post the moment you made it and guiltily click my browser window shut.

I'm glad you like it. I'm really glad you like it. I spent a long time on this one (as you very well know, and shut up, shut up, stop looking at me like that), and it's fantastic to hear that you think it's in character and hot and stuff. Really.

And I'm done editing! I'm done I'm done I'm done! Really! Don't kill me in my sleep because I still wanna write Mitsui!

kasugai_gummie April 23 2006, 22:59:10 UTC

..............

One of my wifeys just informed me that she doesn't like Rukawa that much and instead already has an OTP that is Sendoh/Hanamichi.

The fact that she thinks Rukawa is some "gothic drag in a jersey..." My heart breaks.

cubicle_days April 23 2006, 23:50:56 UTC

....

*snerks*

Hah! Told you that Mitsui is better!

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passepartout April 23 2006, 09:41:48 UTC

Loved all of them! Specially #4 and #5! You describe so well the scenes, that is absolutely amazing *___* In number 4, what Agon did was totally unexpected; so cruel!
And the first encounter of Rui and Hiruma, just brilliant.
#3 was great, too xD

Thank you for sharing these jewels with us!

cubicle_days April 23 2006, 20:02:52 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm really happy that these came across the way I wanted them to, since they were so incredibly fun to plan out. I think I have this tendency to abuse the characters I like, because I totally wrote number 4 just to see Hiruma lose, and I totally wrote number 5 just for the look on Rui's face when he realizes that he's not top dog anymore. *g*

I'm glad you enjoyed!