Comments | ctorres: Sara ficlet #1 (prompt 12, sixth sense)

ctorres

Sara ficlet #1 (prompt 12, sixth sense)

May 12, 2006 17:05

First ficlet for philosophy_20, and only twelve days late. Oops. This is really more of a snippet than a full story, but it'll do.

( #12: Sixth sense )

myfic-csi, philosophy_20

Comments 10

ariestess May 12 2006, 22:13:13 UTC

Oh, I liked that! Very nice!

ctorres May 13 2006, 05:01:17 UTC

Thanks :)

velocityofsound May 12 2006, 23:10:51 UTC

I like the subtlety of this. Nicely restrained and real. Merci.

ctorres May 13 2006, 05:02:29 UTC

Mmm... good feedback. Thanks :)

acrossmyface May 14 2006, 09:43:56 UTC

hm I don't usually read Sara/Sofia, but this was cute! Very cute. Sara picking up 'the signs' like that. And then Brass figuring out on his own about Sofia and Sara. cute!

ctorres May 15 2006, 01:56:21 UTC

Thank you!

shatterpath May 15 2006, 02:36:06 UTC

That was a great use of good characterisations, particularly Brass.

ctorres May 15 2006, 04:53:46 UTC

Thanks :)

mrswoman July 15 2006, 22:30:54 UTC

That was very nicely played. Loved Brass *and* his deductions ;-)

ctorres July 16 2006, 09:05:08 UTC

Thank you, both for the feedback on this and the other one. I'm glad you liked them :)

And speaking of... here's the prompt table that I'm working off of. See anything there that you'd be particularly interested in reading a Sara-centric story about? I've been pestering the first available CSI fan whenever it's time to start working on one. Numbers 4 and 7 are in progress and number 9 is being held in reserve for some point in the future when I'm desperate. Other than those, anything I haven't already used is fair game. I'll take a number... number and a pairing... number and some additional little prompt... nothing, if nothing comes to mind... whatever floats your boat.