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Standing Still 16/?

Mar 13, 2011 20:58

Title: Standing Still (16/?)
Author: CSIGeekFan
Rating: R (Language)
Genre: Drama/Angst
Summary: It's been five years since that fateful day that he walked away from Oakdale. Five years since he had his heart ripped to shreds. Five years since the ultimate betrayal.

A/N: This would have been up a couple hours ago, but my youngest child decided that ( Read more... )

luke, lure, reid, fanfic

Comments 19

f3d0ragirl March 14 2011, 03:18:24 UTC

omg, i have missed this story. *reads* :-D

csigeekfan March 17 2011, 23:36:57 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm sorry for being so late on the reply. I love the icon - it makes me crave summer.

sripley March 14 2011, 03:38:34 UTC

hey! first i just wanted to suggest also posting this story on my new comm, http://community.livejournal.com/lure_taboo i think it is a perfect story for this comm!

love the family vibe of this whole thing, in every chapter.
faith is so right.

i love the idea of the ladies getting together
and the guys going fishing ;D

<3

csigeekfan March 17 2011, 23:38:05 UTC

First, thank you for the comment. I'm a little late in responding, and for that I apologize. Soon I'll hopefully have enough time to post this to lure_taboo. Possibly this weekend.

Thanks for reading.

marsabi March 14 2011, 03:48:43 UTC

Nice on Faith! I laughed at Lucinda talking about John here too! Nice job

csigeekfan March 17 2011, 23:38:22 UTC

Thank you!

bluemagicrose March 14 2011, 05:39:49 UTC

UPDATE!!!!!

Yes, I'm excited. All the women in Ash's life in the same home? I think he's better off fishing. I'm not surprised someone invited Katie. Ash would have to see her (and Chris for that matter) before they went back to NYC. If they went back to NYC (it feels like false hope, but I do have some that they'll stay in Oakdale. Especially since Jason is doing so well and him and Ethan are friends.). I am surprised that it's Faith. Don't know why though. And that scene, how Carl and Jason wake Ash up, and then Janie just looking at them? I know I say this every chapter, but just another little thing that makes me lover their family. :)

csigeekfan March 17 2011, 23:41:19 UTC

All the women in Ash's life make up a rather unique mix. One I'm glad people are enjoying. The way Ash woke up in this chapter occurred because of a conversation between myself and my brother about wrestling.

alissablue March 14 2011, 12:32:34 UTC

Oh, dear. This is going to one hell of a Thanksgiving.

It's amazing to read about their little family, I love how they interact with each other.

All those ladies in the same room sounds wonderful as well, I can't wait until Carly, Emma and Katie get there. XD

csigeekfan March 17 2011, 23:55:12 UTC

Thanks. I agree. It's going to be one hell of a Thanksgiving. Gotta get through the day before first, though.