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barush in csianti_block

18 again

Jul 22, 2006 18:21

Well, this is my first CSI fic/drabble ever, so it's not as good as anything here, but bear with me please lol

Title: 18 again
Characters: Greg, Grissom
Rating: G (at least I hope, never understood it properly lol)
Challenge:1

...sometimes I feel I've got to...

Greg lifted his fist above his head and shaked it.

...run away I've got to...

Now he did ( Read more... )

challenge 1, pg, barush

Comments 10

it_glitters July 22 2006, 17:10:35 UTC

LOL = OMG I could just see Greg getting down in there! And then teaching Grissom - OMG, laughing and then Eclie... :)

So as for the tags and ratings - there's something weird with the tags that Mango will fix.

And then ratings:
G - no dirty language (you would let children read it)
PG - (which I think this should be) one or two hints of something
PG13 - references to a lot of bad things
R - Drug usage, references to sex (like she gave him head - even without the description of it would make it R)
NC17 - Graphic visuals of any sexual act (I know there has been disscussion over on NicknGreg - so this is the company line here, and generally is in the places I've posted)

barush July 22 2006, 17:17:45 UTC

aah, thank you very much!!!:)
for your nice review and for explaining:) really, I have never knew properly what this stuff means lol
thanx again:)

kennedy_unknown July 22 2006, 17:31:41 UTC

Poor Grissom... he would have hated being in that position.

barush July 22 2006, 17:39:07 UTC

I guess so lol
that's why I've put him in such position:)

tanisafan July 22 2006, 17:39:21 UTC

That was really funny, I enjoyed it heaps!

"You?" Greg couldn't stop from laugh. "Um,sorry, go on."
I can see Greg saying this to Grissom. Also, I love how you made Greg all nervous being around Grissom like he usually is *giggles*.

"Now shake your ass!" exclaimed Greg totally devoured by the situation. "Hips, I meant hips." he was quickly trying to correct himself.
This made me shake with laughter *wipes tear from eye*. Awesome line!

Great stuff! And yeah, ratings suck 'cause everyone interprets them so differently. I guess we're safe if we use the ones Nicole just mentioned ;).

barush July 22 2006, 18:37:39 UTC

thanx so much, I'm glad you liked it:)
it was quite fun writing it 'cause I've imagined Grissom doing all those things lol
yeah, I'm gonna use the ratings above as well:) it really helped me:)

quantrail July 23 2006, 04:58:43 UTC

Nice story, I like shy Greg =)

barush July 23 2006, 19:16:27 UTC

yeah, I love him shy as well lol
thanx:)