Comments | csecooney: THE NEW GOBLIN FRUIT IS LIVE!!!

csecooney

THE NEW GOBLIN FRUIT IS LIVE!!!

Jun 23, 2014 07:29

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poems of my 30s, now we are 32, love letters, triumphant everything, may-caity-hey!, rhode island is the world at my feet, beautiful amal, oh the games we play, goblins, m-o-o-n spells moon

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negothick June 23 2014, 14:41:19 UTC

Great poem! But since it's in electrons and thus can be changed, did you mean "fellow" in this line?
"to feel up the ass of the follow behind her"

csecooney June 23 2014, 19:09:48 UTC

In Blues dancing, there is always a lead and a follow. The follow is not GENERALLY a fellow, since it's often a male who's the lead. Not always though. Occasionally a follow might be a fellow. Mostly I've seen female follows.

Try to remember that kind of September
And fooooollllooooowww!!!
Follow follow follow FOLLOW!

negothick June 24 2014, 14:12:55 UTC

Thank you--you've made it much clearer now.
I did not know that "follow" could be a noun. Now I do. Maybe.

ext_2623394 June 25 2014, 04:53:39 UTC

Love it. I especially love it because I got to hear it before it got published. Which makes me feel special. <3