Comments | cs_whitewolf: HPFanFic: Snow, White [SS/Aberforth. SS/Albus]

cs_whitewolf

HPFanFic: Snow, White [SS/Aberforth. SS/Albus]

Mar 16, 2006 23:37

Title: Snow, White.
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[&]: [m/m]: aberforth/severus snape, challenge: snape rareslash ficathon, character: [hp]: aberforth dumbledore, character: [hp]: severus snape, fic: wordcount: 1000-5000, fanfic: harry potter, character: [hp]: albus dumbledore, fic: rating: pg/13

Comments 18

scarlettmoon March 16 2006, 17:34:31 UTC

Ohhh.. I don't have anything coherent to say right now, except that I adore the white, red and black imagery.

Awesome!

cs_whitewolf March 17 2006, 11:01:09 UTC

Thank you! Being incoherant isn't too bad a thing, providing you enjoyed the story of course :) Thanks for reading!

Peace,
CS WhiteWolf

rexluscus March 16 2006, 18:16:25 UTC

Oh, holy shit. I am a MESS now. I didn't think he was really going to do it and then...he did it. That was so painful I felt like I was the one getting stabbed. Wow, what an impressive, wrenching little story. It broke my heart when Snape thought Aberforth was Albus, and then when Aberforth used Snape's devestation to murder him...wahhhh! My god.

Well done!

cs_whitewolf March 17 2006, 11:11:16 UTC

Well, if I've reduced at least one reader to a gibbering mess, then my work here is done. Heh, but seriously- eee to receiving such a response! I am so very relieved this has fic has been taken so positively, especially with the pairings involved! And as for all the angsty drama in it- I'm afraid, my dear, it could never have ended any other way- why not?- because then it would qualify as a 'happy' ending, and I couldn't have that :D

Thanks for reading!
Peace,
CS WhiteWolf

shaychana March 16 2006, 19:11:57 UTC

yikes! and wow! so very angsty and dark. i really like the dense description you used in this piece, the slow, deliberate pacing that magnified every tiny movement into significance in the loving detail you drew and the formal tone of the omniscient narrator. also, brilliant plot device to get the two characters to meet.

cs_whitewolf March 17 2006, 11:13:42 UTC

Thank you very much! Such praise for this piece; I am very pleased to have you say such lovely things about the way I've written 'Snow, White', I did try very hard to keep it flowing smoothly with the tone I was trying to create, it's great to know I've pulled it off so very well.

Thanks, Shay!
Peace,
CS WhiteWolf

titti March 17 2006, 11:25:56 UTC

Wow, just wow. Love the use of colours, especially the red blood on the white snow. Very powerful.

cs_whitewolf March 18 2006, 00:11:23 UTC

:) Thank you! I'm so pleased that you've enjoyed reading it, and that you liked the mentioned colours- I had worried it would all seem too 'drab', but am glad that's not the case.

Peace,
CS WhiteWolf

the_senjou March 19 2006, 03:37:17 UTC

weird in that this surprised the heck out of me, but VERY VERY COOL :)

cs_whitewolf March 19 2006, 04:01:34 UTC

Heh, I know what you mean as well. This was an experience to write, so I'm rather glad you thought it was 'cool', the scary thing about it however is that I think after this ficathon I may be up to reading more 'Snapeldore' (as I believe it is called). The thought is a scary one.

Thank you for reading, Senjy!
Peace,
CS WhiteWolf

the_senjou March 19 2006, 04:34:21 UTC

yay!! I love snapeldore!!

cs_whitewolf March 19 2006, 10:11:54 UTC

Yes, I'm very well aware you do- but for me? This is very traumatizing, Senjy! O_o... I can't seem to stop seeking out and reading any Snapeldore that crosses my path. I am very distressed right now. That is all.