TWFanFic: Last Drink [Jack/Ianto]

[cs_whitewolf]

Title: Last Drink
Author: CS_WhiteWolf
On Website: beyond-redemption.net
Rating(s): PG/13-Rated.
Pairing(s): Jack Harkness/Ianto Jones.
Warning(s): Angst, oh the angst!
Word Count: 2031words.
Summary: Unbetad. Set the night after Episode 1.04, Jack cannot allow Ianto’s deceitfulness to go unpunished. He takes Ianto out for a drink.

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It was nothing

Comments

[elfinessy]

This is heartbreaking. And I so wanted Ianto to wake in Jack's arms. Gorgeous.

[cs_whitewolf]

:) Thank you! I'd have loved to have Ianto wake in Jack's arms, with Jack having been unable to leave him after all... alas that the angst!whore in me wouldn't allow that. Maybe next time, eh?

Peace,
CS WhiteWolf

[elfinessy]

I can understand that - I have lots of writers on my flist who are the same with angst :-) I'm a fluff bunny, so just ignore me :-)

[cs_whitewolf]

Well someone needs to like the fluff, I suppose ;) Seriously though, I'm glad you liked my fic despite the angst and I promise the next one will have a bit more hope/romance to it! heh.

[altorogue]

Oh, it just tears at you! So good!

[cs_whitewolf]

:D Thank you very much! I'm soso pleased you liked this!

Peace,
CS WhiteWolf

[losergeek42]

Ouch, that actually caused physical pain, I love it.
Sheer brilliance, every single line.
I'm sorry I can't be more constructive, but there's nothing I could think of improving.
x

[cs_whitewolf]

I don't think I can thank you enough for that last comment of yours- nothing you can think of improving? That is high praise indeed and makes me very happy! :D Thank you for reading, my dear, your feedback is very much appreciated!

Peace,
CS WhiteWolf

[redscharlach]

Simultaneously tender and dark and sad. I liked it a lot.

[cs_whitewolf]

Thank you. I think the little touches and hints at what could have been make the angst aspect of this piece so much more potent; I'm happy you liked! :)

Peace,
CS WhiteWolf

[adafrog]

Oh wow, beautifully done. Such pain, and almost wasted opportunities.

[cs_whitewolf]

::smiles:: I'm glad you found this piece so! I have hope however that they will meet again and then there will be no more 'wasted opportunities'.

Thank you for reading!
Peace,
CS WhiteWolf

[adafrog]

aaah......is there a sequal then? *lifts eyebrow suggestively*

[cs_whitewolf]

Ha. And here I though I was being oh-so subtle! There may be a sequel, yes. I've already started jotting down a few points I'd like to have happen, so we'll just have to wait and see! :D