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ellie_fo_20 August 16 2008, 04:12:53 UTC
awe that was so cute, they went mini golfing on their date.
their little flirting with each other was so sweet :)
cant wait for the next chapter ;)

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crystalsc August 17 2008, 04:07:23 UTC
Thank you so much! The story has been much more sappy/romantic than I had originally intended but I am having a lot of fun with it. :) I've been much slower with chapter 6 but I'll let you know as soon as it's up!

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crystalsc August 18 2008, 22:05:10 UTC
if you're interested, chapter 6 is now posted. :)

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ellie_fo_20 August 19 2008, 00:08:04 UTC
thanks for the heads up
heading over to read it :)

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simone7418 August 16 2008, 15:49:58 UTC
I finally had a chance to sit down and catch up with this and I'm glad that I did.

I bet Sam couldn't have been more surprised by Dean's admission. He probably never considered that his big brother wanted more than a girl in every port kind of thing.

The chemistry and attraction between Dean and Reagan is great, so real and I can just hear their conversations in my mind. In my opinion you've really got Dean's inner thoughts pegged too.

Keep up the great work, I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

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crystalsc August 17 2008, 04:16:21 UTC
wow. thank you so much! I'm glad that it feels real to you. It happens like a movie in my mind and I just "take dictation" as it moves. For me, the attraction of Dean is his inner turmoil, his angst so I'm glad I've been able to translate. I hope I can continue to do so.

The sixth chapter hasn't been flowing quite as easily for me but I hope to have it up soon. I'll let you know.

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simone7418 August 17 2008, 04:59:56 UTC
I hope that chapter six is coming out easier for you. When I have that problem (which happens much more than I'd like) I try to go back and reread from the beginning, sometimes that sparks something for me.

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crystalsc August 18 2008, 22:05:40 UTC
if you're interested, chapter 6 is now posted. :)

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