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hab318princess January 9 2010, 19:46:16 UTC
That was amazing, loved that and how you integrated the TW team so seamlessly in the story

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crystalshard January 9 2010, 19:51:46 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

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idamus January 9 2010, 21:45:09 UTC
Great job :D

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crystalshard January 9 2010, 21:47:24 UTC
Thank you!

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wynkat1313 January 9 2010, 22:08:19 UTC
That was way cool, nice and tense with all the action bits. Lots of fun to see how you chose to blend the TW and TG pieces.

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crystalshard January 9 2010, 22:25:14 UTC
Thank you! I enjoyed figuring out how to blend the two together, especially when modified for the DW universe.

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choccy_grl January 9 2010, 22:28:41 UTC
I really enjoyed this, thought the action sequences were well written (I find scenes like that quite hard to write)

Nice job.

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crystalshard January 9 2010, 22:33:18 UTC
Thank you! I admit to being worried about the action sequences - it's the first time I've written action on that kind of scale, so hearing that you think they worked is a great relief.

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choccy_grl January 9 2010, 22:37:03 UTC
Yeah it did work and like I say I know how hard they are to write - I had a couple of kungfu scenes in my reel tw story and they were really difficult.

BTW it's good to see a new tw story from you.

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crystalshard January 9 2010, 22:38:34 UTC
It'll probably be my last TW story, to be honest. I'm moving on to new (or old) fandoms. Torchwood's just stopped speaking to me, somehow.

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teachwriteslash January 10 2010, 02:34:54 UTC
Oh I've been waiting for this one ... I love the way you integrate the TW characters and situations. I also really enjoy the interplay between the characters. Nicely done!

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crystalshard January 10 2010, 08:48:10 UTC
Thank you! Turning the TW characters into pilots was both harder and easier than I thought it'd be.

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