Fic: The Road of Destiny (6/?)

[crystal_mk]

Title: The Road of Destiny (6/?)
Author: crystal_mk
Pairing: Matt/Mohinder
Rating: PG-13 for this part but NC-17 as a whole
Summary: Destiny writes the road but do we get to decide whether or not we follow?
Warnings: Angst!
Disclaimer: I own nothing.

It was two weeks after I asked for Peter’s help in implementing Bennet’s plan only to have him refuse to

Comments

[boymommytotwo]

UGH! did i totally miss that bennet's plan is to produce a virus exclusivly for sylar? or did you reveal that just in this chapter?

oh, your angst and venom b/t matt and mohinder is just wretching! i hate it! it's too good! :( ;)

thanks for the quick update - keep 'em coming pleeeeeeeeze....

[crystal_mk]

LOL, you missed that part. It's Part 3. Here's the address (I'm not smart enough to actually have the link):
http://crystal-mk.livejournal.com/17629.html

I hate having that venom too, but it really works for my plot.

Thanks for reading!

[crystal_mk]

Hey look it worked! I take it back, I am smart enough!

[hanuueshe]

Ouch! Mohinder, what are you thinking? Go home to your family right now and pretend Sylar doesn't exist, at least for a few hours. Build bridges, don't burn them. Ack!

This really is a morally grey area here. By taking out Sylar, he gets rid of the source of his daughter's nightmare, not to mention a psychopath with a real reason to want his entire family dead. But he's putting himself in so much danger, not to mention his relationship...

Is it wrong of me to think that HRG is actually still hoping for the seducing Sylar plan? Because wth Matt gone, there;s just one less thing between him and Mohinder.

[crystal_mk]

Mohinder you poor, poor fool. He really should learn to listen to us. (I do realize that I'm the one writing this, but shhh...don't tell anyone)

He's in quite the pickle here and I feel bad for putting him there.

All I can say is that HRG has his own motivations that will be revealed eventually but will (I hope) be pretty surprising!

[boudecia7]

Ooh, good argument!--I hate to see them not getting along, but you wrote it so well. I'm really anxious for the next part now...

also, Elle: ha! trying to work a threesome and making poor Mohinder hide under his desk--hilarious! :D

[crystal_mk]

Whew, I'm glad the argument ended up turning out so well.

Elle, she's a little devil. I have the most adorable image in my head of Mohinder hiding under the desk.

Thanks for reading!

[carmexgirl]

Oh no you broke my boys! Fix them now, you hear?

This was too good - the angst and the tension was just heartbreaking, and you wrote it so well you had me screaming "Noooooo!" very loudly at the screen.

BTW: Would pay good money for a deleted 'threesome' scene :D

[crystal_mk]

*is hiding*

You talk to your computer too? I'm not weird!!

Hmmm...so what exactly is "good money"? :D

Thanks for reading!

[me_likee]

This is intense! I am mentally exhausted after reading it. I really sympathize with Mohinder. You rendered his internal conflict so well. The tension between Matt and Mohinder is sharply contrasted with the soft and tender moments from Mohinder's memories. You made my head hurt.

a much needed lighter note: You are sure Mohinder's assistant's name wasn't Anne? And the idea of the threesome made me laugh.

[crystal_mk]

Wow, I mentally exhausted you. Now that's impressive!
I'm sorry I gave you a headache, want me to kiss it and make it better? And I'll make you chicken soup!

Hmmm...that's quite possible, although I certainly don't know any Anne who would want to be Mohinder's assistant. Would you? :D

Thanks for reading!

[me_likee]

Yes, would you please?
Would I know any Anne? Sorry, no, come back soon.

[crystal_mk]

*kiss*

Better?