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Dec 06, 2010 17:33

Title: Control (Chapter 3)
Fandom: Glee
Rating:  R
Characters: Kurt, Burt & Mama Hummel (This chapter)
Pairings: Eventual Puck/Kurt, Kurt/OC
Warnings: Mental illness(ED's), emotional abuse, death/illness 
Word count: 1498 (this chapter)
Summary: Anorexia is not a disease. Anorexia is not a game. Anorexia is a skill, perfected only by a few. The chosen ( Read more... )

character:kurt.hummel

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haolover9312 December 6 2010, 22:09:17 UTC
YES!!!! This series is back!!!! I was waiting so long for the series to be updated and I'm glad you finally got the next part in. Also, Kurt's desire to find control in his life has been presented very delicately and realistically. Great job and I can't wait for more!

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crystal_marbles December 7 2010, 18:46:54 UTC
I'm glad you liked the chapter and that you're still following it. It took me w while to get this chapter up, but I'll definitely update faster from now on. ;P

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archilymn December 6 2010, 22:33:13 UTC
Oh wow. Ouch.
This whole thing was so beautifully done.
Eating disorders - anorexia in particular - are quite a sore spot for me, as well as many others I'm sure, so I simply must commend you for the grace and seriousness with which you're handing this. The thoughts, the emotion, the lead-in, it's all so devastatingly real; Kurt acknowledging that he'll never be attractive (to himself at least), and then denying himself comfort of any sort because he feels he doesn't deserve it?
Christ.
Then that final line? Go ahead and twist the knife why dontcha.
Lovely work dear. <3

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crystal_marbles December 7 2010, 18:50:37 UTC
Oh, wow. This is such a lovely comment. ♥

I'm glad you liked it and found it to be realistic. It's very much based on my own experienced with ED's so I wasn't quite certain wether to post it or not, but seeing comments like these makes me glad I decided to do it. =)

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lezi December 6 2010, 22:36:00 UTC
I'm excited you updated this! I love the realism in this, and the beautiful way you present Kurt to the audience. Kurt's alone time with his mother's body was especially heartrending, and I'm terrified but looking forward to more of this story.

Update soon, please! ♥

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crystal_marbles December 7 2010, 18:51:37 UTC
I'm glad you liked it and I'll be sure to update faster in the future. ♥

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bymagajones December 7 2010, 19:38:42 UTC
This is really an amazing story. Because Kurt is all about control, he could have easily ended up like this. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

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yaoi_ezi December 7 2010, 20:03:14 UTC
It's almost scary how well you tap into the emotion and lay it out. Very well written and also very sad.

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