like we're falling in love

[crystal_halo19]

title: like we're falling in love
pairing(s): dongwoo/sunwoo
rating: pg-13
length: 1,443 words
summary: because pretend is all sunwoo really knows, and dongwoo wants to change that.

Comments

[fourcoldpaws]

this was really nice. i sort of have a complicated relationship to these introspective narrated pieces lol but you pulled it off well and you choose your words nicely. :)

[crystal_halo19]

thanks :) haha i was kinda worried about the word choice and stuff because it always sounds awkward :P (also this is one of my first few attempts at this style of writing D:) so thank you, i really appreciate your comment! \o/

[une_jonquille]

I liked this! Especially the details about how the different members show their stresses differently (Jinyoung snapping, Channie clamming up, Baro pretending everything's fine) and how the quiet of night is both restful and unsettling.

[blackheart_lies]

this is beautiful ♥