[Fic] Incognito - Roy+Ed

[cryogenia]

Title: Incognito
Rating: PG
Pairing: Roy+Ed gen
Words: 2600
Dedication: For my darling Yama-chan who gave me the idea (happy belated birthday, btw ^^;;); and for devils_devotion, whose awesome fic "Cat's Eye" reminded me I was supposed to be writing this XD

Comments

[storyinmypocket]

Very shiny. ^_^ I really like this.

Though there's this one bit that goes: He was even twiddling his thumbs together, the

Just like any other brat, that he could have seen waltzing down the street.

...might want to do something about that?

Also, much, much love for He wrapped his fingers around a five-spot and hurled it at the kid, wishing that he didn’t have to notice that the gold of the child’s (Fullmetal’s) hair was exactly the same as the gilding on his wrist watch, and that the boy’s brilliant eyes were as sunny as his hair. Damn distinctive. Far too memorable. ♥

That just jumped out at me. Even without slashy subtext (which I'm definitely choosing to read into it, but it works without), it's lovely.

[cryogenia]

Uwaaah! Cut and paste failure! I'll hunt it down and destroy it ~.~;;

Thanks for the sharp eyes ^^ And thanks for the kind comment, it really made my day :)

[reikah]

*Goes off somewhere to angst out of jealousy*

Why? Why do you have to be so good? ;_;

[cryogenia]

*scoffs* I could (and do!) say the same for you, missie :D

[velvet_mace]

Ah... Poor Ed, constantly getting beat up. Poor Roy for caring.

It's still safely Gen... though, getting laid is always a good ambition.

[cryogenia]

Yeah. Everybody likes to beat on Ed!

Though granted, he seems to bring some of it on himself ^.~

And ICON LOVE! <3

[mikkeneko]

Garsh, that's sweet. :)

[cryogenia]

So is your icon :) What's the lyric from?

[mikkeneko]

Sneaker Pimps, Waterbaby. *grin*

[epicdisaster]

Which is a flippin sweet song. Yay Sneaker Pimps.

[anax]

*worships at your feet*

[cryogenia]

*amused*