[fic] "Forward the Machine" - Chapter 04

[cryogenia]

Title: Forward the Machine - Chapter 04
Genre: Action/adventure, AT (diverging from mid-CoS)
Rating: R
Coauthor/beta credit: My lovely livewife mikkeneko and partner in crime sky_darkSummary: (AT diverging from mid-movie): What if the Thule Society hadn’t opened the Gate on that fateful November 8th? What if Alfons Heiderich had yet to fire his rocket? What if

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[sky_dark]

*nibbles fingertips* Al's running away! And Ed, find him Alfons! Save him! ;;_;;

[cryogenia]

XD Yeah, everybody's in trouble now :P

[truly_wished]

Ah! Al, get your ass back home! No running around without Ed! Even if you have to to find him. Geez, Alphons is certainly determined to think he's crazy, isn't he? Seeing Doppelgangers and such.

[cryogenia]

Yeah, poor Al is gonna be in some trouble...and poor Hei is convinced that he's dying for sure now and that his dreams are telling him he is running out of time.

[feriowind]

:0 Oh my, Noa isn't actually a consumptive, is she? She's just treated like cause of her abilities, right? And Alfons doesn't know about her abilities, yes??

Sorry for all the questions. Your fic makes me very anxious! What's gonna happen next?!

[cryogenia]

Heee - you hit the nail on the head! Alfons doesn't know that the real reason they're herding Noa around like that is because they fear her powers :)

As for the rest of it - working on it right now XD

[mikkeneko]

The plot, as they say, thickens! If Hei really thought that Noa had run off with Ed, that theory is shot to hell now. >:) And it's about time Al got a move on -- unlike the others, I'm not particularly worried, since he can take care of himself. :p He did in the movie, after all...

[eli_artemisia]

I want to smack Alfons for being such a puddle of woe :F I do think it's cute that he keeps thinking "what would Edward do?" He's so timid in comparison to Ed. Now that he's found Noa, I'm sure his young genius mind can figure out that Ed is probably around here somewhere and GOOD GOD MAN FIND HIM!!!!

Yay for run away Alphonse! *cheers for him*

Much Love,
Marysia

[cryogenia]

Thanks <3 I'm glad you liked Alfons trying to think like Ed :)