[fic] Forward the Machine - Chapter 3 (AT, Action/Adventure)

[cryogenia]

Title: Forward the Machine - Chapter 03
Genre: Action/adventure, AT (diverging from mid-CoS)
Rating: R
Coauthor/beta credit: My lovely livewife mikkeneko (with hand-holding help from sky_dark!)
Summary: (AT diverging from mid-movie): What if the Thule Society hadn’t opened the Gate on that fateful November 8th? What if Alfons Heiderich had yet to fire his rocket?

Comments

[sky_dark]

Poor Als! I feel so sorry for both of them! ;_; This is amazing stuff my dear, just amazing stuff <333

[cryogenia]

<33 I'm glad you like it :) It wouldn't exist without you to hold my hand!

(Now clearly we should trade off days writing and we will be unstoppable fic-producing machines XD)

[militsa]

[cryogenia]

<3 I'm so glad you like it - I was a bit unsure whether it would be too much to replay the whole scene (especially since Alfons wangsts on about that in chapter one as well), but I think that's really bothering him - he feels like he drove Ed away, when really a) he likes Ed a lot and b) 'poor Ed' is crazy/crippled, what kind of a person is he to have driven him out to god knows what kind of lifestyle XD

[militsa]

[cryogenia]

XD You know, I've really been tempted to upload a loop of nothing but that scene to YouTube as it is... :)

[crazyloststar]

this is definitely getting more and more interesting as the story continues. I really enjoyed the flashback of the night that Alfons hit Ed-seeing his feelings exposed more as opposed to him just showing the outer frustration and anger was a great side of things. :D

[ankoku_tenshi]

Wow. I really like how you build everything up and then just let it explode. Its incredibly cool. And the 3-D hologram was a nice touch.

[innate]

"If you’re just a ghost, something that I dreamed…maybe it’s better for him if you just stayed dead. I’ve watched him chase too many phantoms already."

That's just such a quotable line. STOP BEING SO AWESOME, CRYO.