[fic] "At the Very Ports We Blow" Part 3/5 (Gen, preCoS)

[cryogenia]

Title: At the very ports we blow (Part 3 of 5)
Author: cryogenia
Pairing: None (gen)
Rating: R (rating has increased)
Prompt: For 7stages, set 1, #5: "i hear the electric shock"
Spoiler level: Post-series, pre-movie
Warnings for this chapter: References to ethnic tensions, both fictional and historical

Part 1 - the effect of impact on stationary objects
Part 2

Comments

[ankoku_tenshi]

I like the tension that starts building. But Ed does need to get a hold of some common sense and understanding.

[cryogenia]

Thanks! And Ed isn't actually making 100% the wrong decision here...he doesn't always go the wrong way with things.

[marith]

This story is made of awesome, no matter how much I cringe at Ed's complete obtuosity. Thank you.

[cryogenia]

Thanks - I'm glad you like it :) Ed is trying; this world is just hard for him :-/

[crazyloststar]

I am loving this fic so much. the interaction between hohenheim and ed just tugged at me so much. i really feel you pinned how they would act around each other perfectly.

i cant wait for more, and to see how alfons and ed somehow reconcile? MAYBE? POSSIBLY? or more punching will ensue? XD

but really, all your characters interact wonderfully together. i love your writing. <333333333333

[cryogenia]

Thanks - I'm glad you liked Hoho and Ed. And yes, Alfons and Ed will be talking to each other more - they have to :O

[tir_synni]

*sighs happily* Wonderful depth to both the world and the characters, and I love how Edward is being forced to adapt to life without his watch. XD And I also adore the Ed+Hoho interaction.

[cryogenia]

Thanks <3 I'm glad you like the Ed and Hoho part; I really wanted to address their relationship :)

[innate]

I don't have anything to add that wasn't already said, but you get general ♥ and zomgican'twait for more.

And I fangasmed at Hoho-papa.

[cryogenia]

<3 Thanks, I am so glad you like it :)