[fic] "At the very ports we blow" (Gen, Hei+Ed, PG)

[cryogenia]

Title: At the very ports we blow (part 1 of 4)
Author: cryogenia
Pairing: None (gen)
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: For 7stages, set 3, #2: "effect of impact on stationary objects"
Warnings: Post-series, pre-movie
Author's notes: Special thanks to sky_dark, without whom this fic would not in 23092309283 years ever existed. Posting Part 1 of 2 now, part 2 to come tomorrow cause a

Comments

[brinylon]

Great stuff, I love this Ed <3 And Alfons is just trying to come to grips with his emotions, right? Right? XD

[cryogenia]

:) Glad you liked it. Keep in mind we're working from a third-person limited POV here - this Ed is a lot of fun to tag along after, but he is a b-i-a-s-e-d source of information, as a warning ;)

[crazyloststar]

this is a very interesting and different way of ed and al interacting than i have read before, and im really enjoying it! i look forward to reading more! <3333

[cryogenia]

<33 Thanks - yeah, I figured fanon was about due for an overturning XD;

[cryogenia]

<3 Glad you like it - I'm having a lot of fun writing Ed as a biased observer :)

an icon for Heiderich ^

[hieronymousb]

Ahahaha. Okay, let's see, what to say here?

Well, first and foremost, all the little details you put into this story really caught my attention as I sat and read it. Germany was nice and gritty; I liked the atmospheric touches, the attention to the setting, the references to external sources (Der Golem), the fact that Drachman = parallel to German (nice touch!), the ponderings about Hohenheim, the bits of chemistry, Ed's culture shock and his difficulty in adjusting to Earth's sciences. Very awesome. You genuinely conveyed to me the emotions I would expect Edward to experience in this situation. You made me believe that yes, this is how it would go down

Re: an icon for Heiderich ^

[cryogenia]

Thanks for this wonderful in depth review - it really lets me know what is working and what isn't :) I hope I can conclude it satisfactorily.

[truly_wished]

It's different from the usual, where they get along automatically. S'cool.

[cryogenia]

<3 Thanks, glad you like it...I wasn't sure how people were going to respond to this coming from me XD;