[Fic] The faint lumens of counterglow (Hei/Ed, PG)

[cryogenia]

Title: the faint lumens of counterglow
Author: cryogenia
Pairing: Hei/Ed
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Only for Heiderich's existence.

Comments

[ghost1880]

fav line:

He gives Edward that one look again, and for the life of him he can't tell if that's because Alfons can't see him, or because he does.

you sure have a knack with ending fics with a meaningful line. something that makes you go: ...huh.

<3

[cryogenia]

<333 I am so amazed you even read this, thank you :)

[cuylerjade]

Last line = win. So typically FMA... Ed in particular.

<3 as always!! :D

[cryogenia]

<3 Glad you liked it ^_^

[sharibet]

Lovely writing, as always, and even lovelier characterizations.

[cryogenia]

Thank you! I am trying something different for an upcoming fic and I wanted to try switching up styles a bit f^^

[t3h_toby_chan]

So wonderful, subtly tragic, and so believable. Your ability to write these two is enviable.

[cryogenia]

Thank you so much <33

[fallia]

Oh, Cryo ♥

I love this so much. Just...so much. The way you used the stars, and, and, the way you used Alfons needing glasses, and it's just so wonderful.

He never knows exactly what he expects in those moments, but it is something that never comes.

That was my favorite line. Poor Ed. This is beautiful.

[cryogenia]

I am glad you liked it :) I really respect your Alfons characterization; it means a lot to get a good review from a fellow Hei/Ed author.

[fallia]

You've got me wanting to work on Hei/Ed again now because of this fic. :)