[Fic] The Beholders

[cryogenia]

Title: The Beholders
Pairing: None (Edward-centric)
Genre: Fluff, I guess? I dunno. Somebody read it and tell me. Unless "Ed-fic" is a genre...
Rating: PG
Warnings in effect: None, for once :)
Credits: sky_dark for the Al x Penny Dreadfuls OTP :)

Comments

[sky_dark]

you are love. and he is gay XD

[cryogenia]

Heee, thanks! (And he is not sexualized at all here, you spoon :)

[cryogenia]

Thanks. I was hoping to get across a bit more of the idea that Ed can't see himself as attractive for a lot of angsty reasons, but uh...it came off cute and fluffy instead.

Besides, I have full confidence that once he *does* figure out that he's sexxy, he'll milk it for all it's worth :)

[mikkeneko]

Oh lord, what would those girls have done if he DID suddenly take off his coat in the middle of the car. They would have died. XD

I liked the fic. It was funny and fluffy (even if it wasn't meant to be) right up until the last moment, which brought it to a close with just such an air of melancholy sweetness.

[cryogenia]

Thanks :) You know, actually I hadn't thought about what the girls would think if I'd let him stand up and start stripping? XD (Guess I can prove they're not Sues, now :)

AND ICON LOVE! I think I nearly died laughing at the is :)

[envylicious]

that's great :D i'm not reading english ff so often, but last time i alvays read yours and always die :D

[cryogenia]

Thank you :) It means a lot to have you reading!

[dusk]

I love this XD I would stare at Ed if he were on the same train as me... :D

[cryogenia]

Thank you ^^ (And yeah, I think we all would :) )