[fanfic] Never

[dongbangsuju20]

Title: Never

Pairing: none. Junsu Centric with OT5

Genre: drama. angst. friendship. AU.

Rating: PG

Words: 1 741

Warning: unbetad. depressing (lol)

Summary: What do you need to be able to sing?

Thanks to: kitkii because she always encourages me, because with her help I was able to write this. i love you

Disclaimer: Don't own DBSK.

A/N:I just

Comments

[kitkii]

your details are always so beautiful. this is so beautiful. i love the tinge of sadness that just runs throughout. it's so wonderful...kind of bittersweet. i love the 'you didn't try. you just did it.'

and 2nd pov works well for your writing, you stress over it too much xD

thanks for writing ♥

[dongbangsuju20]

;^;
thank you
I still remember how I tried to prevent myself from writing too many details but somehow I just learned how to write not too long but yet with details?!
i love that you like that <3
it makes me feel more confident!

it should be bittersweet and I love how you just got the feeling right ;^;

haha, well that's what I always say when someone says 'i will try to do this or that'
i will just reply with 'don't try it, do it!'
idk, I didn't thought of that when I wrote it, that just comes afterwards now :x

thank you <3
I am glad that the POV I really like~ to write, seems to be okay for others too ^-^

thank you for the reading and the, as always, amazing and flattering and encouraging comment ♥

[engbreakfast]

I think this is your most well-written piece, although I haven't read many. The way you described each member was breathtaking, you know how sometimes two words, when they are the right ones in the right order, is all it takes? You did it (:

sensitive like rough sand paper doubled with silk

clear, like a morning you never saw since the end

His voice spoke of maturity

Perfect, really. My favourite was that he couldn't sing until there was all five of them together. &hearts

[engbreakfast]

agh i can't edit, that really annoys me. ignore the italics at the end. i forgot to unitalic it, like always.

[dongbangsuju20]

aww, thank you <3~
makes me confident~ haha
for that it came out when I was depressed and idk what else :x XD

aww thank you ;^; that is such a flattering~~
I am glad you see it like this~

yeah that was the point somehow, somehow it became the point haha <33