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FIC: Partners

Dec 03, 2008 01:59

Title: Partners 
Characters/Pairings: Elle/Mohinder  
Rating: R 
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes or any of its characters  
Word count: 977 
Spoiler alert: little bit of AU starting from "Cautionary Tales," not all that spoilery , really
Summary: Mohinder has to deal with his mischievous new partner.
A/N: Merry Christmas, aurilly! This one's for you. If ( Read more... )

fanfiction, pairing: mohinder/elle, character: elle bishop, rating: r, character: mohinder suresh

Comments 7

aurilly December 3 2008, 16:10:42 UTC

This. Is. PERFECT. Thank you so much! Seriously, one of the greatest Mohelle fics ever! I'm bouncing right now with so much excitement. :)

I just love all the lines in this. I love how she calls him Fight Club. HEE!! And the whole thing where she's fully clothed and yet erotic is just perfect; she's trying hard to be sexy but it's stil innocent, and I like how you created that balance there.

His hair was still soaked, and water ran freely down his neck and shoulders, collecting in his belly button and the small of his back.
This was a very hot image in my brain. Ngghh.

connected with his shoulder with a hiss, dancing briefly through the rivulets of moisture that still traced his body.
What a fantastically beautiful way of putting this. Wow! I'm in awe of how your can create such beautiful images. *is jealous*

He sounded at once angry and sincere and petulant and pitiful.I loved this part so much. It's so Mohinder, all of it, every adjective. Especially because he expects people to be so straightforward with him. He doesn't deal ( ... )

cruiscin_lan December 3 2008, 17:00:48 UTC

What am I supposed to do with this shiny new soul? Well, I guess I could use it, since I sold my old one to the devil in exchange for plot bunnies. ;)

You write the best review/comments EVAH. <3 right back atcha!

dragynflies December 3 2008, 19:08:09 UTC

I love love love slutty Elle. Because girl knows she's hot, there's no way she doesn't. I can totally see her doing this.

Excellent work, as is typical from you :)

perdiccas December 3 2008, 19:22:07 UTC

This was great! Really fun and really hot! A Christmas present for us all really! :)

cruiscin_lan December 3 2008, 19:23:32 UTC

Is that Mohinder in your icon? Can I just tell you that I love his belly button/treasure trail? :-P

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cruiscin_lan December 6 2008, 06:19:06 UTC

Thanks for reading :)

eternal_moonie December 7 2008, 14:54:02 UTC

i love it, good fic