Comments | cruiscin_lan: Fic: Spring (Verb, Intransitive)

cruiscin_lan

Fic: Spring (Verb, Intransitive)

Apr 11, 2009 04:16

Title: Spring (Verb, Intransitive)
Characters: Sylar/Claire
Rating: PG-13 (one f-bomb)
Word Count: 686
Disclaimer: I don't own any aspect of Heroes or its characters
Spoilers/Warnings: Spoilers for the end of Vol. 3
Summary: She realizes there's no reason to be afraid of him any longer; he's taken what he wanted from her already, right?
A/N: ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, fanfiction, pairing: sylar/claire, character: claire bennet, character: sylar

Comments 19

raitheemohugger April 11 2009, 12:08:56 UTC

This is all sorts of excellent and wonderful. Love the creative use of the prompt, and the unique style of the piece. This is amazing on its own and could be continued (you know we'll all beg). In short, thanks for sharing.

cruiscin_lan April 11 2009, 21:09:08 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! But there's only so many definitions of "spring," so it's unlikely I'll continue.

At least this time I have a pretty reasonable excuse!

kathrynthegr8 April 11 2009, 13:14:08 UTC

Oh this is lovely! I love how you took every menaing of the prompt and used it. Nice.

cruiscin_lan April 11 2009, 21:10:54 UTC

Thanks for reading! I had a lot of fun writing this one. I love it when prompts have so many directions to develop!

ashesfor_trees April 11 2009, 14:06:15 UTC

Ooh, I really enjoyed this! I LOVED the end--unexpected, but fitting for Sylar and Claire.

cruiscin_lan April 11 2009, 21:11:32 UTC

Thanks! I wanted to make sure Claire got to be more in control this time, since I don't typically write her that way.

fbdarkangel April 11 2009, 16:42:11 UTC

Damn! that was deep!

*firefly/serenity quote of the day*
Mal: Do you have time to do my hair?
Inara: Out!

cruiscin_lan April 11 2009, 21:12:35 UTC

Thanks for reading!

Does Inara perhaps have time to do my hair? Because hers is really pretty.

aegoceros April 11 2009, 18:09:45 UTC

Woo! This popped my Sylar/Claire fic cherry! And I liked it. The ending especially, as well as the overall mood of the piece. They have an interesting dynamic that I think you captured well.

I loved the definitions as segues into the different scenes! Such an awesomely creative use of a prompt!

cruiscin_lan April 11 2009, 21:14:05 UTC

Woo! This popped my Sylar/Claire fic cherry!

Don't worry, I'll still respect you in the morning.

Glad you liked it, and I'm even gladder that you gave a new pairing a chance. :)