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Fic: Angel with a Broken Watch, Chapter 9

Jan 12, 2009 15:48

Title: Angel with a Broken Watch, Chapter 9
Characters/Pairings: Elle/Gabriel, a little Elle/Haitian, Bob Bishop
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes or any of its characters
Word count: 963
Spoiler alert: definite spoilers for 3.08, AU from there
Summary: It's in her best interest that she doesn't remember any of this...

( Fic and A/N here )

character: bob bishop, rating: pg-13, fanfiction, character: molly walker, character: gabriel gray, angel with a broken watch, pairing: gabriel/elle, character: elle bishop, pairing: elle/haitian, character: sylar

Comments 21

ateenwriter January 13 2009, 02:47:29 UTC

You write Bob so well. His referring to the baby as her little indiscretion was just spot on I could see that so clearly.

cruiscin_lan January 13 2009, 18:26:52 UTC

Maybe I should specialize in Bob-centered fics from now on! Lol.

ateenwriter January 14 2009, 04:12:02 UTC

He's definitely a creeper lol
I was always kinda disappointed me never got into his mind on the show... so if you wanted to try and dive in that'd be awesome
lol
subtle hint

blackout_girl January 13 2009, 04:56:57 UTC

I loved this chapter and, while I enjoyed the scenes with Elle, Bob, and the Haitian; my favorite was the mention of Sylar attacking the Walkers. I like the idea that, after Elle disappeared, his hunger returned and he became Sylar. It is very sad and I can't wait to see what happens when Elle and Gabriel meet up again. I wonder if he will be mad at her for disappearing or if he will just be too happy to have her back in his life.

Please update soon!

cruiscin_lan January 13 2009, 18:29:56 UTC

Even though this is definitely an AU fic, I like to keep things as close to canon as possible. I'm debating whether or not Elle may even meet Molly soon. But I wouldn't get my hopes up about Gabriel and Elle meeting again...

eternal_moonie January 13 2009, 10:05:02 UTC

I totally love this chapter!!!

cruiscin_lan January 13 2009, 18:30:08 UTC

Thanks for reading!

di_elle January 14 2009, 14:00:29 UTC

start to wonder why bob and the company want the baby... he is special?

lemomina January 22 2009, 00:41:45 UTC

I don't know how i stumbled onto your page but i'm glad that i did , I started reading all of " Angel with a broken watch " tonight back to back and i just finished .
I just want to say WOW , this is really amazing , i loved the relation between Gabriel and Elle and i felt so sad for her and what she's going through , I also love The Haition thoughts.
I hope you update soon and can we get more of Gabriel / Sylar !!