FIC: Angel with a Broken Watch, Chapter 8

[cruiscin_lan]

Title: Angel with a Broken Watch, Chapter 8
Characters/Pairings: Elle/Gabriel, the Haitian
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes or any of its characters
Word count: 869
Spoiler alert: definite spoilers for 3.08, AU from there
Summary: It's in her best interest that she doesn't remember any of this...

Comments

[dragynflies]

This fic = win.

I love this, because you sneakily added it in after I thought you were done!

. Still, like the obedient Company girl that she was born and bred to be, she returned to her Spartan room, and took out her frustration the best way she knew how. Sitting on the bed, she juggled small sparks between her fingers. She practiced her sharpshooting by aiming at the bars on the windows. She powered up and sent a powerful blast at the wall, crackling the paint and leaving scorch marks on the plaster underneath. By that afternoon the whole hall smelled like ozone.

But Bob...she was practicing. You can't be mad at her for making sure she was in top form. I love the line about the hall smelling like ozone -- little details and all that. ;)

[catyuy]

Welcome to hell.
Here is you complimentry handbasket.
Have fun now.

[midasu]

I like that you have Elle planning on going back. I think that you really get what Elle's reactions would be. First she panics and runs to her Dad and the company and then she thinks for a moment and figures out how she can go back to where she wants to be...but she hadn't really figured out all the consequences, like Gabriel's reaction.

[eternal_moonie]

I so agree with dragynflies, this fic = awesomewin!! I love this chapter so much!!

[jess_ucv]

I love the fact that she wants to return to Gabriel, I know is not going to happen, but still you gotta giver credit for that!