Comments | cruiscin_lan: FIC: gone in search of refuge

cruiscin_lan

FIC: gone in search of refuge

Mar 18, 2010 22:58

Title: gone in search of refuge
Characters: Finn/Quinn
Word Count: 1153
Rating: R
Disclaimer: If I owned Glee all proceeds would go towards the Howard Bamboo Legal Defense Fund.
Spoilers/Warnings: Spoilers up to "Sectionals," warning for dubcon and dark themes.
Summary: You said you'd do anything to make it okay.
A/N: Well, this is the opposite of ( Read more... )

character: finn hudson, pairing: finn/quinn, character: quinn fabray, fanfiction, rating: r, fandom: glee

Comments 16

becca_radcgg March 19 2010, 03:53:50 UTC

Dude! What have you done to my Finn?!?!?!??!

It kills that he's so destroyed that he'd do that to her then realize how empty it is anyway. Intimacy can't be faked. *sigh*

His breath feels warm and wet and it makes the small hairs on the back of her neck stand up.

I love this line. It's so beautifully descriptive, an ominous foreshadow of the things to come.

cruiscin_lan March 19 2010, 12:44:54 UTC

I'm sorry, Finn!

I don't know. I just get the urge to write some really dark stuff sometimes. At least your drabbles exist to counter my ficlet, y/y?

fuzzy_paint March 19 2010, 04:19:19 UTC

cruiscin_lan March 19 2010, 13:29:01 UTC

I KEEP HURTING YOU. MY BAD.

(I had to include Mrs. Hudson I think to keep myself from falling into a completely angsty pit of despair.)

boysinperil March 19 2010, 04:36:08 UTC

His breath feels warm and wet and it makes the small hairs on the back of her neck stand up.

I'll second Becca, this is a wonderfully creepy line.

cruiscin_lan March 19 2010, 13:31:33 UTC

Thanks, I think. ;)

kathrynthegr8 March 19 2010, 11:59:36 UTC

Damn, girl! That was dark. I loved it. Very well done and wonderfully creepy.

cruiscin_lan March 19 2010, 13:41:56 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it! While writing this I thought "Hey, even if no one else reads it, I bet Kat would.":)

biruuu March 19 2010, 13:03:44 UTC

Oh, man. So sad for everybody involved. Each scene was more heartbreaking than the last one.

At first it was weird trying to picture Finn as scary since he's so sweet in canon, but we did get to see a more aggresive side of him in Sectionals, so if he got drunk, it's plausible that he may react like that.

It was short but really powerful. I really liked it.

cruiscin_lan March 19 2010, 13:57:14 UTC

...we did get to see a more aggresive side of him in Sectionals, so if he got drunk, it's plausible that he may react like that.

I hope we never find out for sure!

Thanks for reading!