Cold War

Jun 26, 2012 18:07

Title: Cold War
Author: crucibilly
Pairing(s): John/Elizabeth
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2082
Genre: Angst
Summary: During the first year on Atlantis, John fights a war with Elizabeth. He doesn't know why.
Notes: This is weird, and a little dark, and maybe more than a little out of character.  It has a Sheppard coming to terms with how large Elizabeth looms in his life ( Read more... )

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thisisagift June 27 2012, 14:19:32 UTC
I loved this so much :)
I'm all for fluff sometimes, but sometimes it's detailed and nuanced descriptions of their darker sides feel so much more real and like them. You captured John's flaws without turning him into a monster, they way he is feels forgivable and understandable in a way.

Anyway, yes, really awesome job :)

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crucibilly June 29 2012, 19:46:36 UTC
Cool, thanks! Glad you liked it.

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