Comments | crowswing: gosh, sportsy rpfic again.

crowswing

gosh, sportsy rpfic again.

Aug 16, 2006 14:30

studying for tomorrow's test? who, me? hah hah ha.

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wordcount: 900
rated: pg
characters: Pavel Nedved, Alessandro del Piero
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footy, fic

Comments 8

niamh_x August 16 2006, 19:59:27 UTC

I love the way you write...the phrasing. And how you bring in all five senses throughout the fic. It's beautiful. The dialogue is so very natural too...

I love it. :-)

crowswing August 19 2006, 17:35:51 UTC

thank you!

zimena August 17 2006, 09:35:23 UTC

First of all - PAVEL FIC!!! I love you just for putting my number one hero in a fic! Actually, my heart almost skipped a beat when I saw the link to this fic in footballslash, and of course I went to read right away. Also - the fic itself is beautiful. I especially loved this line:

‘ah, but won’t you catch me before that happens?’

Absolutely lovely fic, and absolutely nothing to be nervous about posting. You should write more, too!

crowswing August 19 2006, 17:37:29 UTC

i am glad i could provide you with new Pavel fic. and also that it was enjoyable. really, thank you. :]

gengkotsuya August 20 2006, 17:55:59 UTC

I may not be a fan of Del Piero or Nedved but this is beautifully written, almost lyrical in places. Something you don't see/expect from sportsy fics...well, except when said fic is written by you.^^ Of course, it's always of high-quality and the story kind of stays with you for much longer than any of those run of the mill fanfic types. Actually, that Materazzi/Zidane piece still gives me the shivers(in a very good way) when I think about it!xD Not to sound fangirlie or anything but you are that good.:)

crowswing September 6 2006, 14:43:52 UTC

ack, thank you very much, not sure if i deserve so much praise :]

windsor September 8 2006, 01:57:10 UTC

This is gorgeous, delicate and sharp and absolutely lovely. I kept thinking about saturated colors, the snap of a camera lens, textures and layers and subtle shifts while reading this; I don't know if that makes any sense whatsoever, but. :x It's difficult finding good writing in this fandom, so I'm terribly glad that you shared this. ♥

crowswing September 9 2006, 04:17:00 UTC

it makes perfect sense because sometimes that's exactly how i see things when i'm writing :] thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave such a nice comment.