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crowson75

To Give & Forget - Part Ten

Nov 03, 2007 12:43

Title: To Give and Forget - Part 10 of 15
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: 18 - sex
Summary: The team arrive and all is forgiven...but who's shouting?
Disclaimer: TW characters not mine...

Author's Notes: Beta-ed by my lovely
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fic, tgaf, jack/ianto

Comments 12

tiggerbrasilf November 3 2007, 13:35:20 UTC

Cool more story. The first bit was very guh (: Its getting even more intriguing over time (:

crowson75 November 3 2007, 13:48:13 UTC

Thanks love! Yeah, the story is beginning to unfold a little now...well you'd hope so considering there's only 5 left, wouldn't you? ;)

tiggerbrasilf November 3 2007, 13:59:24 UTC

I suppose we shall find out everything in 5 episodes time (: Its fun though and nice to read (:

maja_carlisle November 3 2007, 14:07:54 UTC

Aaaaahhh... cliffhanger... noooo!!!!

*bites fingernails*

Since this is the first time for me to comment on your fic, lemme say I love it!!! I started reading about 1 week ago and it was so nice to read them all back to back and now the suspense is killing me...

Can't wait for the next part!!

crowson75 November 3 2007, 15:04:50 UTC

Sorry! :)

Thank you for reading these... I'm very glad you're enjoying them. Alas, you've got to this point and now you know how evil I am! ;)

Part Eleven should be up in the middle of next-week.

anonymous November 3 2007, 16:55:48 UTC

Another great chapter. So sweet Jack wanting to take care of Ianto but Ianto wasn't having it. Lovely. The conversation Jack and Maldwyn have brilliant who would have thought at the begining of this story Jack would be confiding in Maldwyn. Looking forward to next instalment and finding out what Maldwyn tells Jack about Moses. Thanks.

crowson75 November 3 2007, 22:10:33 UTC

Glad you're enjoying it my love and thanks for commenting.

I think Ianto always strikes me as the sort of person who really would fight to be an equal outside of work and in his relationships. The subservience can only go so far!

And yeah...I think Maldwyn should be full of surprises!

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crowson75 November 3 2007, 22:12:37 UTC

*laughs* I'm not, I swear...it was just a very good place to stop! Honest.... ;)

darthhellokitty November 3 2007, 21:38:02 UTC

You end these in the most awful possible places! XD XD XD

Lovely, lovely Jack/Ianto scene. They do so take care of each other.

I bet Maldwyn WILL kill Jack if he hurts Ianto. XD

crowson75 November 3 2007, 22:14:08 UTC

*Grins* Yeah... well, it was too good an opportunity to miss!

Thanks, I am glad you like the Jack/Ianto scene. I was quite pleased with it myself.

And yeah...Maldwyn could get very naughty if Jack was to be a bad boy! ;)