(Untitled)

[crowley_gal]

Random Acts of Kindness Part 2

-------

"Dean. Hey, Dean. You with us?" he heard a voice call him.

He really wanted to tell them to go away. He just wanted to sleep.

"Dean!" he heard the voice call sharply to him once more.

Reluctantly he opened his eyes and saw the doctor standing before him. He groaned when he felt the pain still present in

Comments

[jennytork]

I really liked this!

(except that they didn't know about the angels pre-series)

I love how the names of their friends and family just kept echoing. I love that Sam and John were finally there for him.

[crowley_gal]

Thanks for the feedback. The angels were supposed to be forshadowing, which is why I decided to include the names. When I was writing I orginally hadn't intended to name all the characters after people in the show, it kind of just happened that way.

I'm glad you liked the story.

[jennytork]

AAaaah, I get it now!

*grin*

Thanks for explaining, and thank you for a great read!

Random Acts of Kindness

[taylorariel]

A very creative and enjoyable job here. At first I thought Dean was dreaming but it was nice to know- at the end- that he wasn't.

Glad to know a kind stranger helped your Mom out. If only there were more people like that.

Re: Random Acts of Kindness

[crowley_gal]

Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It was fun trying to find a way to include everybody.

[weesta]

I loved the chain of events that brought all of these people into Dean's life, and his "you can't fight the tide, Sam" attitude when Sam started to pick up on it too.

[muffaletta]

I love the idea that all these people really do care about Dean- he just doesn't realize it. Very nicely done!