Poem: "Practical" Sawyer [Lost]

Jul 20, 2006 20:41

Title: Practical
Character: Sawyer
Rating: PG
A/N: For her majesty
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summer luau, my poetry, writing: lost

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zelda_zee July 21 2006, 05:59:05 UTC
Oh, you are so amazing. I just don't know how you think this way. It's so completely foreign to me and yet somehow I think I can follow this, and your other poems. Maybe b/c they're about characters I know so well, it gives me a way in.

Why were you nervous about this one? It seems absolutely wonderful and intriguing to me.

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crowgirl13 July 21 2006, 19:12:44 UTC
*laughs*

Heck, I wish *I* knew how I think like this...all I can say is it's twisty crowgirl logic and I'm glad that it continues to entertain you. :D And all your comments on the poetry clearly show that you do understand it [which does not surprise me in the least, considering the lyrical and image-rich nature of your own work].

The nervousness turned out to be displaced school poetry anxiety - there's a separate post on that bit of drain bamage. *shakes head at self* On my re-read this morning I decided that this poem was pretty effective. Thank you for the reassurances though- it's so helpful knowing that an idea works outside of your head too.

So- thank you for reading, thank you for commenting and double thanks for just being you. ♥!

PS: I love that icon beyond all reason. It always makes me smile.

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