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sly_fuck October 24 2010, 14:17:56 UTC
”I figured that with us, you probably need all the help you can get. I don't think the Irish will mind,” Mikey says. MIKEEEEY. *clutches them* Although good point about the boys and opening your hand, lol.

There's a roaring in Brian’s ears as he tries to not think about Halloween birthdays, Día de los Muertos and sugar skulls.

He looks down at the the key chain.
The words seem clouded now, scratches like pond scum hiding the letters.

Luck.

Brian thinks of twisted metal, of five graves and throws his keys against the far wall. With a snap that sounds more like a gunshot, the epoxy enamel cracks on the door frame and the keys fall behind the radiator. The images and sounds and the feelings. You know you leave us feeling like we just threw those keys right?

Brian knows which one is real. What he can't understand is why he sees double at all.
If he wasn’t numb all the way through, Brian would be worrying that he's finally gone crazy. Finally gone? LOL, no. I see what you did there.

Brian’s almost asleep when the shadows behind his ( ... )

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crowgirl13 October 24 2010, 20:27:33 UTC
MIKEEEEY. *clutches them* Although good point about the boys and opening your hand, lol.

Oh yes, &MIKEY;. And ha! I know, right? Between these dudes and The Used, Brian's dealt with it ALL. [I want someone to write me a five things, Five Things Brian's Been Handed That Re-Define the Word Disgusting.]

The images and sounds and the feelings. You know you leave us feeling like we just threw those keys right?

♥___♥ That's my hope, but I never quite know if I'm succeeding. This comment is such a gift. Thank you, bb.

Finally gone? LOL, no. I see what you did there.

LOL, IKR? I figured the dude's entitled to some personal delusions. Whatever gets you through the day, you know?

OH MY HOLY FUCK WHAT HAPPENS NEXT YOU EVIL WOMAN
Dude! You know what happens - it's the stuff in 'Bound By Events Greater Than Himself'. Which was admittedly very, very rough. But your capslock got me revising it. The first post has been posted and then second will hopefully be ready later tonight. *smooches*

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sly_fuck October 25 2010, 03:57:38 UTC
Dude! You know what happens - it's the stuff in 'Bound By Events Greater Than Himself'. Which was admittedly very, very rough. But your capslock got me revising it. The first post has been posted and then second will hopefully be ready later tonight. *smooches*

*snickers* My work here is done. LOL. I know I hit send and went and reread things. But I figured I'd leave the comment as is. It's an honest reaction, after all. XP ♥

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crowgirl13 October 25 2010, 04:04:56 UTC
BRAT.
[Not really - it was bugging me that I had to flock 'Bound' because it needed revision so desperately.]

So wait, you went and re-read it before I got the revised version up? BOOOO. :( I think it's better now?

Though I really wish these guys would figure out their awkward group dynamics so I could POST THE OTHER PART OMG.

It would prolly help if I stopped chortling over being being a BAMF. >.>

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saxihighlandck October 28 2010, 13:24:32 UTC
/o\

Brian, Boys. I... I just want to hug him and tell him it'll be okay but... *hands*

He knows but he doesn't its... *hands*

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crowgirl13 October 28 2010, 14:55:22 UTC
/o\ sums things up nicely, yeah.

Brian needs all the hugs he can get [not that he will willingly accept them...]. He's in such a frustrating position. Poor dude.

[Yay for you, though. :D]

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turps33 November 6 2010, 20:27:44 UTC
Now I feel even worse for Brian.

He got the key chain from Mikey and he broke it and why am I mourning it along with him?

I really liked the details of the double visions, even though my heart broke yet again when you talked about him packing up the apartments.

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crowgirl13 November 6 2010, 20:42:43 UTC
And it just gets worse for him, from here too. For a while anyway.

Because it's the most obvious symbol of his grief and how broken things are for him? *hugs you*

Oh thank you, I'm glad the details worked for you. I was really trying to ground this in real things with the details, so that's a very helpful thing to hear. :) And ugh, I KNOW RIGHT? So much heartbreak. Poor woobie.

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