Total win. I like the bobbys out there and your bobby is wayyy cool. This sucked me in, it reads like bobby's journal entry (duh) and how you did the subtle reveal, slowly, was good. At first I wasn't sure if it was ennis as a boy, but your hints worked real nicely;)
Love the bad grammar ... and the way bobby spelled principal too.
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Love the bad grammar ... and the way bobby spelled principal too.
This makes me wanna write a chapter or two.
Thank you.
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