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Oct 03, 2011 11:38

author: crow 61348 ( Read more... )

bobby twist, jack twist

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aint nobody gnashsang October 6 2011, 07:02:52 UTC
Total win. I like the bobbys out there and your bobby is wayyy cool. This sucked me in, it reads like bobby's journal entry (duh) and how you did the subtle reveal, slowly, was good. At first I wasn't sure if it was ennis as a boy, but your hints worked real nicely;)

Love the bad grammar ... and the way bobby spelled principal too.

This makes me wanna write a chapter or two.

Thank you.

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came across this while looking for something else gibbous_moon October 24 2012, 21:16:11 UTC
and wow am i glad i did. a great piece of representation of bobby. hey, maybe we'll even get a chapter 2? i would love that. thanks for a good read.

kj

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