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forever comes in every two years

Dec 05, 2010 21:47

title: forever comes in every two years
rating: pg
genre: angst
pairing: yunho/jaejoong, pinch of ot5
summary: Yunho promises Jaejoong of forever, but forever's never the way it's supposed to mean.
A/N: the spawn of what happens when moonkissedx links me to a chinese angst fic at 3 a.m. in the morning. thank you stickyblocks for the beta!

( jaejoong still believes one of the aeroplanes had taken away his heart. )

pairing: yunho/jaejoong, pairing: ot5, author: pikasu, length: oneshot, fandom: dbsk, genre: angst

Comments 79

pikasu December 5 2010, 13:53:25 UTC

spot for the chicken.

stickyblocks December 6 2010, 01:00:05 UTC

tsk. use beta next time, not chicken. /stabs.
anyway,
YOU SHOULD STOP WRITING/FINISHING AT UNGODLY HOURS, BECAUSE IT WOULD ENTAIL TO ME MURDERING YOU BECAUSE YOU WROTE THE ENTIRE PAST IN PRESENT TENSE. AGAIN. /sigh.

like i said, this was really good and sad, and yes i read the chinese one, IT WAS SO SAD HOMG. TT TT
/adds on to your comment burden.
♥

pikasu December 7 2010, 04:33:33 UTC

stupid chicken >:
sexpose me about my past/present tenses!! HAHAHAHAHAHAH

stickyblocks December 7 2010, 05:43:36 UTC

*expose.
BUT YEAH AHAHA.
WRITE MORE SOON. ^^

pikasu December 5 2010, 13:54:06 UTC

spot for the marshmallow. it's unhealthy to angst at 3 a.m. LOL.

blackcherriess December 5 2010, 13:56:42 UTC

spot :D
angst is not for this early morning or late nights
so i'll be back another time bb

pikasu December 5 2010, 14:08:22 UTC

HAAHHAHAHAHAHA yes this is true weeping and trying not to cry at 3 am at night is not rly a good thing! OH DID I TELL YOU I BOUGHT GREEN TEA

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pikasu December 5 2010, 14:08:40 UTC

DDDD: bb don't cry <333 /hugs you and hands you a tissue

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pikasu December 5 2010, 14:10:50 UTC

moral of the story: don't read angst fics in the wee hours of the morning TT
i'm glad you liked the plot though, i honestly didn't know what i was writing cos i was too sad by the chinese fic omgggg you should read it if you understand mandarin P: sdhdosughag ♥

jae_dbsk4eva December 5 2010, 14:02:21 UTC

ahh..why isit so heartbreaking..=(
u nearly made me tear up..TT

pikasu December 5 2010, 14:09:14 UTC

DD: i'm sorry? ;___; thank you for reading and bothering to leave a comment though ♥

jae_dbsk4eva December 5 2010, 14:12:45 UTC

haha..i have learnt to comment so u writers will be motivated to write..^^
though i might be lazy smtimes..
what's the chi fic u reading? u mind giving link? =)

pikasu December 5 2010, 14:15:00 UTC

i was reading this story. that moonkissedx recced pls it is so sad you have to read it because it is very good though i didn't really understand some parts because my chinese is very baaad lololol.

tell me if you like it when you're done okay! ♥

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