eyes like oceans

[pikasu]

Title: eyes like oceans (we were walking on tightropes from the very beginning)
Rating: pg
Pairing: jaejoong/changmin
Summary: sometimes, it isn't that easy to love something after all. but neither is it that difficult either.
A/N: fic ~challenge~ with maxism12 who fails very much. prompt beneath cut.

Comments

[shinchul303]

Your final paragraph is incredible! Almost unbelievable!

I don't write here, but if I did...it's like you got inside my brain.

Spooked.

[pikasu]

ahahah thank you so much!! :') lolol dies! MAYBE I AM IN YOUR BRAIN ER- i mean, thank you!! :D

[nocturnes]

and maybe changmin is not.
THIS. is so Changmin. He has always doubted his position in the industry, and now I think he still does, only he hides it.

long limbs socially inept and expression awkward
Awkward, bumbling little!Min is my favourite thing ever. sadflkjasdf ♥

"life's too short for regrets." jaejoong says.
I feel like this is Jaejoong's life philosophy in a nutshell.

Your characterization of them was so, so perfect. I've missed Changmin written like this, so thank you for that. I think my favourite part was Changmin struggling to find words at the end, the sounds left in the air but nothing else. It's a wonderful state of limbo and it captures his state of mind so well.

Thank you for this. ♥

[pikasu]

asfsdklhg thank you so much omg ;; dies. and it was pretty easy writing changmin like this, actually, since it relates to my feelings and doubts pretty well ;; thank you for reading, emily, and for such a lovely comment T__T dies i will say this over and over again but i love the way you write ♥

[windapaoline]

speechless!!

your writing technique is beautiful <3 yet i dun really jaechun fan

but, i can't quite understand what happen in the end ~.~

[daradaradara12]

''Sometimes the mountain you have to overcome is not the obstacle in front of you, but is that of yourself. Changmin thinks his mountain is huge, and it looms at him so big and frightening it engulfs his entire body in its shadow, deep and never-ending.

One day changmin is going to fall and he will never get out.''

Those lines, especially the last one, pulled at my heart. Nice story, I really liked Max's character in this and how you let us see that Jaejoong will change his life, has already started.

[stickyblocks]

YOU. YOU. /ACCUSING GLARE
YOU JUST HAD TO PUT SHAKESPEARE IN HERE DIDN'T YOU.
well i do like shakespeare though lol.

THIS WAS GOOD as usual -.-
JAEMIN (Y) you should write more.

as should I